Story feedback please

[ManwX]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1277838/project-eden/ I just finished a small story. It is complete. It runs 36,000 words and is all one chapter. I would really appreciate some feedback on it. If you have time to read and share your thoughts, please let me know. Thank you. Genre is sci-fi post-apocalyptic survival. hard scifi concepts etc.

 

[Alski]

It runs 36,000 words and is all one chapter.

Problem number 1.

 

[ManwX]

Problem number 1.

True, it must be jarring. I can split it into 7 parts. Though in one chapter, shouldn't it be more convenient? Edit nvm ill just split it into parts