Stance on Harems and what do you think make them bad? Also if you were to write a Harem, how much do you think would be the number limit of members.

GabrielTenma

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Harem stories are pretty hit or miss. Most harem stories end with unsatisfying conclusions due to cancellation or abandonment. It feels most harem stories lose focus more and more as time goes on.

I think harem stuff is hard to write because most harem npcs have no reason to be desired by female characters other than basic level common curtesy and friendliness. If girls acted like they do in harem stories I wouldn’t be so lonely. Anyone who’s read tu love ru knows how ridiculous this stuff can get, when the mc with the personality of a saltine has over a dozen different girls pining after him including adults decades older than him.

I myself would never write a harem story because I don’t think I could do a harem ending better than Rosario To Vampire.

That’s my two cents
Only watched the two seasons of the anime for Rosario. Is the ending good overall?
 

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I probably won’t have the energy to put in the effort for a masterpiece but I may get to writing it later on.

I have too much on my plate right now in real life. Most of the time I’m posting on the forum is downtime while at work.
Honestly, it's the same for me. Whenever you do though. I'll drop what I'm doing and check it out
 

RepresentingPride

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I’ll check it out.
Not exactly what you're looking for. It's like a Princess from another world live in tokyo since childhood but one day she have to come back to her own world, and her childhood friend don't want to let her go. Due to some prophecy, and not wanting to marry a guys she didn't like, she propose to the mc who accept. Then come the prophecy of him need to marry the seven princess or something like this, while some will accept more or less quickly, other will fight against it in some way?


Edit: If I remember, each princess give him a ring, and by having a deeper relationship with each of them, the power he can use from the rings are stronger. Or something that way.
 

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Isn't there some hidden plot in the dark? I don't remember well, didn't get through a lot of chapters, but there no ntr so obviously not for Anon.
I like revenge after the NTR. So if some guy got NTR’d then got revenge it’s great.
 

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Isn't there some hidden plot in the dark? I don't remember well, didn't get through a lot of chapters, but there no ntr so obviously not for Anon.
He should read NTRevenge(Actual title). It has two things he likes the most.
 

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Wait a sec! Isn't he would like Redo Healer? Harem with ntr and revenge.
RedoHealer isn’t really the kind of revenge I like. The revenge target isn’t really suffering because of a personality wipe.
 

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RedoHealer isn’t really the kind of revenge I like. The revenge target isn’t really suffering because of a personality wipe.
The sword hero didn't had her personality wipe when she got gang bang by her soldier. Same for the commander or any grade he had, when he altered his face have the same as him so he would toyed with.
You see? He is picky.
Yeah, I don't have hentai ntr ref for him. It's sad to not be able to help this poor soul :blob_pat_sad:
 

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when the mc with the personality of a saltine
It makes all the difference when the MC/Center of the Harem's attention is a likeable person with actual characterization and growth.

The "I have no traits bc I'm meant for the reader to self insert" protagonists have their place, but personally I'd rather like the MC as much as his harem does. Lol.
 

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The sword hero didn't had her personality wipe when she got gang bang by her soldier. Same for the commander or any grade he had, when he altered his face have the same as him so he would toyed with.

Yeah, I don't have hentai ntr ref for him. It's sad to not be able to help this poor soul :blob_pat_sad:
The problem is they didn’t know what they were doing or did. Compare this revenge with “Devil Returns to School Days.”

Also, I’m not into rape revenge.
 
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