RepresentingEnvy VS Paul_Tromba Writing Prompt Voting booth

[LowinKeshin]

I'm sorry number 2, but I'll cast my vote for 1.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

I'm sorry number 2, but I'll cast my vote for 1.

No need to be sorry. Vote for whichever is better.

 

[Rhaps]

I enjoy reading number 1, it has the right flow and feels professional (whatever that is).

 

[Prince_Azmiran_Myrian]

Thank you for submitting to my Dragon Judgement.

Spoiler: Story 1 Feedback

A drug trip, and also witchcraft.
Alice in Wonderland-esque, but the deeper meaning of the story is not as compelling.
Flows better of the two but I dislike the ending.
There's probably something I am not getting.

Overall, my appraisal of your story is: Intrusive Thoughts

Spoiler: Story 2 Feedback

A twisted world where an organization fosters and trains insane individuals.
Possible references to forum members.
I feel like I understand all of the meaning, but I am also not very sympathetic to it.
I thought the ending was fitting for the character.

Overall, my appraisal of your story is: Intrusive Thoughts

Spoiler: My Vote

Story 2

It made me laugh a couple of times, and I liked the theme better.

 

[RepresentingDesire]

Number 2 is better because the main charachter is insanely lovable or lovely insane, both are good for an mc to be in my higly objective opinion.

 

[RepresentingWrath]

Number 2

 

[AnonUnlimited]

Looks like it’s tied because everyone know which prompt is Envy’s and are giving nepotistic votes.

 

[J_Chemist]

Looks like it’s tied because everyone know which prompt is Envy’s and are giving nepotistic votes.

It's hard to have an objective poll when it's easy to tell the differences and people have their biases.

 

[AnonUnlimited]

It's hard to have an objective poll when it's easy to tell the differences and people have their biases.

Agreed.

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Looks like it’s tied because everyone know which prompt is Envy’s and are giving nepotistic votes.

It's hard to have an objective poll when it's easy to tell the differences and people have their biases.

Except that isn't true for all of the votes. Some people might have just liked one better than the other?

 

[RepresentingDesire]

Except that isn't true for all of the votes. Some people might have just liked one better than the other?

I liked the second more because the character is insane and I don't know and care who wrote it.

 

[J_Chemist]

Except that isn't true for all of the votes. Some people might have just liked one better than the other?

Oh absolutely, but you do have some that are bias and probably didn't even read them.

 

[owotrucked]

I had to reread it a bit to get it, but that might also be because I'm retarded.

My neuron couldnt take it. I wasnt able to muster the strength to read past it.

I voted 2 because it was easier on my neuron

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Oh absolutely, but you do have some that are bias and probably didn't even read them.

Well, that's also true. Though I am still wondering who wrote which one?

 

[J_Chemist]

Well, that's also true. Though I am still wondering who wrote which one?

 

[Deleted member 84247]

If you didn't think we would copy each other's writing style's then you are not thinking clearly.

 

[J_Chemist]

If you didn't think we would copy each other's writing style's then you are not thinking clearly.

 

[owotrucked]

If you didn't think we would copy each other's writing style's then you are not thinking clearly.

Wtf are you saing, Paul would never write yuri bait

 

[Deleted member 84247]

Wtf are you saing, Paul would never write yuri bait

And I would never cheat in a poll by referencing Alice in a short story, so what say you now, Truckeda?

 

[owotrucked]

And I would never cheat in a poll by referencing Alice in a short story, so what say you know, Truckeda?

Damn I didnt realize it was an @AliceShiki fanfiction lmao