Readers Block or Having Trouble with Plot Progression?

[RepresentingCaution]

¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Let's agree to let this die without any last appendices, then.

OK, but I want the last word ?

 

[SMwrites]

I agreed that it is an exception in my previous post.

Well, this went sideways...

Anyways, if your looking for suggestions on how Hera can manipulate the other dieties so that they do not get together and try to take Hera down, it shouldn't be too hard. They've already been discussing past betrayals from what I gather from your message. Therefore, Hera, being a diety, should be able to implant doubts and create situations which make these other dieties feel that they are being betrayed by one another. for specific things I would have to read the book, but smut isn't my thing.

 

[edgy_chuuni]

Hi Guys,

If you're having readers block or trouble with plot progression, feel free to leave a description of your story, the area of story or plot point your having issues with, and what goal you would like to accomplish with the plot point and I will give suggestions on how you can go forward with your story.

I don't really need anything in return, but if you decide to incorporate my suggestions into your story, please briefly credit me in the synopsis of your book.

Of course, you don't have to use my suggestions if you don't want to.

Good Luck!

My, mc has attained near-godhood and is the strongest in the verse ruling as the king of all the known world as it's one and only ruler.
I've been wanting to write a second story about this character's world merging with a paralell world that is much bigger and having the 72 new kingdoms with their demon kings ruling over them. These kings each foolishly wage war on the mc and end up losing blah blah.

So to the actual problem... These wolds are merged together because of those worlds' gods getting married with each other and deciding to make their worlds one.
My question is: How do you write a date between an airheaded godess who has a type for bad boys and a misuderstood demon god who goes along with his worshippers' antics to not dissapoint them.

 

[SMwrites]

My, mc has attained near-godhood and is the strongest in the verse ruling as the king of all the known world as it's one and only ruler.
I've been wanting to write a second story about this character's world merging with a paralell world that is much bigger and having the 72 new kingdoms with their demon kings ruling over them. These kings each foolishly wage war on the mc and end up losing blah blah.

So to the actual problem... These wolds are merged together because of those worlds' gods getting married with each other and deciding to make their worlds one.
My question is: How do you write a date between an airheaded godess who has a type for bad boys and a misuderstood demon god who goes along with his worshippers' antics to not dissapoint them.

A very common stereotype about girls who like badboys is that those girls like badboys who are gentle only with them. You can use this as a fundamental guideline for their date.

On the date, you can create a scenario where the goddess sees a ritual that the demon god's worshippers are performing. It should be something sadistic like them tormenting a heretic who speaks against this specific demon god. Although the demon god is against torture, he goes along with it to not ruin the image his worshippers have of him, but this makes him look like a rough person in front of the goddess. regardless, she moves forward with the date.

Somewhere along the date, there could be a situation where the goddess finds herself in some minor trouble (something akin to tripping and falling). As this is happening , the demon god saves her and worriedly looks at her and asks if she's okay. This makes her infatuated with him because even though she thinks that he's a rough person, he's gentle and caring towards her. And the rest is your basic "this makes her fall for him and treats him extremely well". As they get closer, the demon god could open up more about his real nature and feelings towards things and she accepts him for his true self. This makes him fall for her as well because she's the only person he can be himself with.

let me know what you think of this and if there is something specific you would like to be added into this scenerio, like a specific emotion (i.e., her being scared of him briefly, sadness, etc.) or anything else.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Well, this went sideways...

Anyways, if your looking for suggestions on how Hera can manipulate the other dieties so that they do not get together and try to take Hera down, it shouldn't be too hard. They've already been discussing past betrayals from what I gather from your message. Therefore, Hera, being a diety, should be able to implant doubts and create situations which make these other dieties feel that they are being betrayed by one another. for specific things I would have to read the book, but smut isn't my thing.

Thanks for trying :)