Rate my first book and a feedback: Trials of the Constellation

ElysPencil

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Hi! I'm ElysPencil and I write my first book as a hobby. Looking for willing people to review my first book. It's messy as I'm discovery writing so forgive the messiness!

 

FRWriter

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This is a feedback thread, not an Update thread. If you want to post Updates or discuss the story, check out the Reader section, though honestly, this Forum is not really suitable for advertising.

I'll give it a read when I have some time, but after reading the first chapter, it's neither outright boring nor badly written. Since it's also not AI, I have to say it's better than a lot of other stories already.

However, there are countless errors in it... use Grammarly, use a spell checker, use whatever, but use SOMETHING.
 
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