Pretty new to this - Any feedback much appreciated

Sicjok3

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HI, I have written about 20k word so far. To be honest, I haven't writen anything since GCSE English but i had an idea so i started writing.
I have uploaded the first 8 chapters so far, and they are defnitely not perfect (I will be going back to edit further). The rest of the book isn't quite at a readable draft stage yet.

guess I’m just curious, does the writing work, or does it need serious help? Is the story idea any good?
With enough time, care and refinement could it be something that people might enjoy?

Thanks in advance,

Aidan

Nine Eight Seven : The Compression
Oops, sorry, I completely blanked that I already posted yesterday. Looking for delete button!
 
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