Posted my first story to SH—would love honest feedback on the blurb + tone

LeslieCrow

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Posted my first story to SH last night—zero traction so far.

Not looking for validation, just curious: is the blurb or tone a turnoff?

It’s a slow-burn erotic story—dark, psychological, and emotionally intimate. Not for everyone. But maybe for someone out there, it’ll ache in the right way.

I’d love any feedback on how I’m pitching it—or if I should hold off until I have more chapters live.

 
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Yahya_Hilal

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Sorry, erotic, not for me, i myself just posted my first novel and asked for a review, came here to learn but erotic... Hmm... Not my kind of taste man, sorry.
 
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