Please give me your criticisms!

[Bella_Trixie]

So, I decided to rewrite my book from scratch! I originally had 10 chapters that totaled up to 14.5k words, but I didn't like it that much after it got into the later chapters.
But, I'm really proud of this version! The first chapter is 8.2k words and is really good, in my opinion!
Please give any advice or criticisms you have!

Gaia: The Lost Child Chronicles - Chapter 1 | Scribble Hub

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[Deleted member 70223]

I read the first 10 chapters of your original version. It was pretty good.

 

[Bella_Trixie]

I read the first 10 chapters of your original version. It was pretty good.

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the original write up. Have you read the new version?

 

[Deleted member 70223]

Not yet.

How far into the story was the original 10? How many more chapters were there going to be?

 

[Bella_Trixie]

Not yet.

How far into the story was the original 10? How many more chapters were there going to be?

The original story was just the beginning of Arc 1's plotline, so not really that far. I have no idea how many chapters I have planned, because I have several arcs in mind. Basically, though, I'm taking the same general structure of the arc and putting it into the updated events of the rewrite.
There's a big difference in Chapter 1 compared to the original write up.