[OPEN 1/3] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3

[Bimbanana]

i like this courtroom

 

[Rosica]

Alright, I'll pretend I understand.

Honestly, there is nothing productive I could tell you. I'd only be repeating what blob said.

That you question my words make you better than most who would blindly follow everything I said.

 

[AliceMoonvale]

Honestly, there is nothing productive I could tell you. I'd only be repeating what blob said.

That you question my words make you better than most who would blindly follow everything I said.

Very true, and lucky for you this is greyblob's feedback thread, so you don't need to worry about providing feedback.
It all works out~

 

[Hans.Trondheim]

ive never roasted anyone's writing. I am a beacon of goodwill

Sorry, I read this as "Bacon of Goodwill."

God. I guess I'm really hungry right now.

 

[Rosica]

Sorry, I read this as "Bacon of Goodwill."

God. I guess I'm really hungry right now.

Eat your adobo, Ed.

 

[Hans.Trondheim]

Eat your adobo, Ed.

I'm on a diet coz I want to slim down, or it'll be my literal end.

 

[Rosica]

@ThirstyWater the feedback thread is open, Son of Solo.

 

[Kazehiro]

its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again.

i'll provide a simple review of what i read. I try to read more than the first few chapters before voicing an opinion which is why i have these few rules

1. No BL or GB or Smut. GL is fine but I do not enjoy so I will be biased.
2. No novels with less than 10k wordd.
3. I'll take 3 at a time and close the queue. I'll only review novels mentioned while the queue is open (do not comment a novel while thread is closed)
4. I won't leave reviews on the novels or comments. I won't send reviews in dms. I'll comment everything.
5. Post a link to your work.


for an example of how the review looks like, id recommend checking my older threads here. it should be somewhat similar

Could you also do mine please?

It's an early story (10 chapter)

After Returning From Another World, My Sister Became Obsessed With Me [Rework]

'What is the most precious thing in the world? For me, it was 'home' ... until I burned it to the ground.' A single mistake I've done cost me everything, my parents' lives, my face scarred by Disgusting burns, and my sister’s ability to walk. For years, Rika looked...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[ThirstyWater]

@ThirstyWater the feedback thread is open, Son of Solo.

I haven't fixed anything other than the synopsis after receiving your feedback. But if you still want to read it, please do

 

[Erysion]

@ThirstyWater the feedback thread is open, Son of Solo.

Sons of Solo. There are two of them:

Could you also do mine please?

It's an early story (10 chapter)

After Returning From Another World, My Sister Became Obsessed With Me [Rework]

'What is the most precious thing in the world? For me, it was 'home' ... until I burned it to the ground.' A single mistake I've done cost me everything, my parents' lives, my face scarred by Disgusting burns, and my sister’s ability to walk. For years, Rika looked...

www.scribblehub.com

I haven't fixed anything other than the synopsis after receiving your feedback. But if you still want to read it, please do

That's rare. Most people don't bother fixing anything and is just asking for validation.

 

[ThirstyWater]

Sons of Solo. There are two of them:


That's rare. Most people don't bother fixing anything and is just asking for validation.

Cause, I really like make or read the story, if the feedback make me improve at it, why not

 

[Bimbanana]

That's rare. Most people don't bother fixing anything and is just asking for validation.

I like you miss chibi vampire

 

[Rosica]

Cause, I really like make or read the story, if the feedback make me improve at it, why not

And if the feedback is so harsh it make you doubt yourself and want to stop writing?

I like you miss chibi vampire

That's not a miss and not a chibi vampire.

 

[Bimbanana]

And if the feedback is so harsh it make you doubt yourself and want to stop writing?


That's not a miss and not a chibi vampire.

Futa vampire??

 

[Rosica]

Futa vampire??

An old hag.

 

[ThirstyWater]

And if the feedback is so harsh it make you doubt yourself and want to stop writing?


That's not a miss and not a chibi vampire.

I think it's okay to take harsh criticism, I don't think I'll ever stop writing just because of that.

An old hag.

Wait... Are you FUTA.?!

Its ok to be Futa there were many people who like Futa, both man and woman

 

[Kazehiro]

That's rare. Most people don't bother fixing anything and is just asking for validation.

I can't serve to people what I think it's bad, and I can't think what I made is good or bad, unless there's someone want to taste it first and tell me their opinion

 

[Erysion]

I can't serve to people what I think it's bad, and I can't think what I made is good or bad, unless there's someone want to taste it first and tell me their opinion

You have a good mindset, Karbiter.

I like you miss chibi vampire

An old hag.

I'm a lich queen. Rosica is my cat.

 

[Kazehiro]

You have a good mindset, Karbiter.

Didn't expect someone would call me that tittle too in here lmao

 

[Erysion]

Didn't expect someone would call me that tittle too in here lmao

One does not simply stop gathering wives.