New Author Seeking Feedback

[tlo4654]

Hello everyone!

I just discovered ScribbleHub and posted the first ~7 chapters of my story.

I haven’t had anyone (beta) read it yet so I would love some feedback on even the first chapter!

Thank you

Nerim: Path to Ascension

Lila wakes up alone in a stone chamber with no pulse — and no memory of how she arrived. The world outside is broken. The forest is alive…and hunting. The people are infected. Cracks split the sky. Something ancient has awakened. Known simply as 'System' it offers abilities she doesn’...

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[Eldoria]

I haven’t had anyone (beta) read it yet so I would love some feedback on even the first chapter!

Well, I've read chapter 1 (prologue?). I wanted to ask, what kind of POV did you use in chapter 1? And why did you choose that POV?