Need some feedback on my story

[Skrol-Kairo]

Hello everyone I've started publishing an epic that's been three years in the making called shidden and I'd like people to review/ give me some feedback

Here is the link for it:https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2334705/shidden/

Thanks to you all who end up reading it I'll be sure to respond as fast as I can !

 

[Eldoria]

Hello everyone I've started publishing an epic that's been three years in the making called shidden and I'd like people to review/ give me some feedback

Written 3 years ago but only 1 chapter released?!

 

[Skrol-Kairo]

Written 3 years ago but only 1 chapter released?!

Written over 3 but I release only two for my personal schedule I am going to move to uploading 3 a week tho