Just wanted to post my story I put up here to get more people invested. Mostly for the K-Pop fans but it’s for anyone really, at least 16 and up

[EMatthews18]

I posted my first story on here and I’m trying to get more people invested, it’s an original work of mine:

The Vampire Idol

Darius Myeong-Jun, 21 years old, is a member of the popular K-Pop trio, City of Angels, based out of LA in California. But he has a secret: he’s a vampire and falling in love with one of his best guy friends was not in the cards…

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It’s my first story on here so I’m open to constructive criticisms.

 

[Xcalibur_Xc]

Better post it in the story feedback thread.

 

[Joelle]

Even if it's not my usual type of interest, I'll give it a try, as for the critique part, I'm still a beginner writer so I don't know if I'll be able to do this part but I'll try... though

 

[EMatthews18]

Even if it's not my usual type of interest, I'll give it a try, as for the critique part, I'm still a beginner writer so I don't know if I'll be able to do this part but I'll try... though

I’m starting out too. So I don’t expect my story to be that great but it’s just to see how things go here.

Better post it in the story feedback thread.

How do I get to that

 

[L1aei]

I’m starting out too. So I don’t expect my story to be that great but it’s just to see how things go here.

How do I get to that

 

[EMatthews18]

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Found it. Thanks though!