I wrote the best of the best (I'm not exaggerating). Do you want to criticize it?

The.AZ · 2026-05-16T23:01:53+0100

Hi, sorry about the title, I actually copied it from one here but it worked. I just want constructive criticism of my story. Plot twist: Yes, I think it's good.

(Sorry, I'm new here)

Kurayami · 2026-05-16T23:02:58+0100

You need to link it

The.AZ · 2026-05-16T23:31:04+0100

Kurayami said:
You need to link it

I've already seen threads explaining how to do it, but I haven't been able to.

I guess I'm a bit of a noob when it comes to these websites.

Kurayami · 2026-05-16T23:36:01+0100

All in All

Save or abandon, he will decide. Allen... what are you hiding from us? (+500,000 words) In a world that should have been just like our own, reality is being altered and reshaped by mysterious powers of different origins. Power manifests not only in abilities, but also in ideals that can be...

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The.AZ · 2026-05-16T23:38:25+0100

I was able to do it, sorry for bothering you.

Wamba2K · 2026-05-17T00:10:36+0100

I started reading but couldn't keep going because the dialogue is marked by em dashes instead of quotation marks. Is there a reason for that? Why?

I wrote the best of the best (I'm not exaggerating). Do you want to criticize it?

The.AZ

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Kurayami

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The.AZ

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Kurayami

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All in All

The.AZ

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Wamba2K

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