I would like feedback on my first series (plus 2 chapters)

[Parade]

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2249744/urban-valor/

This is the link to my series that I am writing. I have currently published chapters 1 and 2.
The front cover is being drawn, and I have hired an artist.
I am looking for feedback from you, the authors, on any major mistakes I may be making.
This is also the first series I've ever written, so it may be rough. Please excuse my inexperience, and I would love constructive criticism.

 

[Eldoria]

I would love constructive criticism.

Dude.. I've read 2 chapters. I want to ask what kind of POV you're using?
Is limited third POV?
Or is objective third POV?
Or is omniscient third POV?

 

[Parade]

Dude.. I've read 2 chapters. I want to ask what kind of POV you're using?
Is limited third POV?
Or is objective third POV?
Or is omniscient third POV?

for the first 3 chapters its omniscient 3rd POV but will switch to limited 3rd afterwards