Writing Prompt Human Blood Farm

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thank you. i appreciate the feedback. i also want the link so i know how much to brag
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Necromantic: Prologue

Necromantic: Prologue Order Tenant 1: Always walk the path of The Queen, for she is the one we pledge our loyalty. — Crimson eyes stared back at her, a reflection on the water’s surface. The moonlight cast her image against the gentle ripples. Her long black hair flowed in the breeze, but it wa...
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'ere you go. Now you can see my abysmal writing.
 
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RepresentingEnvy said:
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Necromantic: Prologue

Necromantic: Prologue Order Tenant 1: Always walk the path of The Queen, for she is the one we pledge our loyalty. — Crimson eyes stared back at her, a reflection on the water’s surface. The moonlight cast her image against the gentle ripples. Her long black hair flowed in the breeze, but it wa...
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'ere you go. Now you can see my abysmal writing.
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this felt a bit like theatre. or maybe it's because its a prologue.. i always skip prologues.. but yeh, you were definitely bullshittng.. this is way better than what i sent... i guess we're all our worst judge..
 
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this felt a bit like theatre. or maybe it's because its a prologue.. i always skip prologues.. but yeh, you were definitely bullshittng.. this is way better than what i sent... i guess we're all our worst judge..
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We really are our worst judge. I cringe at my own writing consistently.
 
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