Hi..New to scribblehub...I just posted my first novel...with my own cover art of course.

[EmperorEmerald]

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What does guarantee one’s alive!; Breathing, heart beat, Blood flows, mana, or holy power. Michael Bell Vanguard, the supposed framed next patriarch of the Vanguard Clan, greatly reprimands the Ceber Continent for the sake of revenge against his blood Cousin and Council elders followed by his own parents. He reigns every battle! No one could stop him! All the greatest sword clans. The greatest Magic families! The magic tower! The Holy Church! And the Kerwin Continent! The new legend of the Vanguard clan lives on while the history of the Electric blade unfolds!
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There's LITRPG tag..Yeah!, they will be one..but It's not the main focus, but its will still be part of the plot, story and progression. And keep in mind, the game element will start like 5 chapters in.

The Legend of the Electric blade

What does guarantee one’s alive!; Breathing, heart beat, Blood flows, mana, or holy power. Michael Bell Vanguard, the supposed framed next patriarch of the Vanguard Clan, greatly reprimands the Ceber Continent for the sake of revenge against his blood Cousin and Council elders followed by his...

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Please and please give it a try

Note: This is my first time writing..so please point out some errors and mistakes. Thanks

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[melchi]

Maybe check for errors before asking others to do so.

 

[Bartun]

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[Representing_Tromba]

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[BearlyAlive]

Welcome to Genderbender Smut Hub where every story that isn't either or will most likely fail!

 

[proxybaba]

Welcome to smuthub, oh sorry it’s scribblehub ?

 

[LunaSoltaer]

Welcome to Genderbender Smut Hub where every story that isn't either or will most likely fail!

Yeah okay I should have realized this going in, especially since I specifically made my story NOT a Gender Bender. Like at all. And it's also Transgender because I'm evil and like existential crises.

The Legend of the Electric blade

What does guarantee one’s alive!; Breathing, heart beat, Blood flows, mana, or holy power. Michael Bell Vanguard, the supposed framed next patriarch of the Vanguard Clan, greatly reprimands the Ceber Continent for the sake of revenge against his blood Cousin and Council elders followed by his...

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Please and please give it a try

Note: This is my first time writing..so please point out some errors and mistakes. Thanks

*Bows*

*Out*

I put this on my read list i might take a while to do so, because I should be working, but I did. Your synopsis looks intriguing, and i bet I will be reading with enthusiasm in short order.

 

[Tsuru]

Sorry for pouring cold water but i suggest you to rewrite your summary
and try later to upgrade your self-made cover.
I write this, not because to down the mood or morale, but more like a vaccination or advice.
Your enthusiasm + typos in the series + FACT its your first series, is praiseworthy and i support you in your path, but sadly this kind of things can result in failure.
Also [The higher the expectations, the higher the disappointment]
And seeing a written hardwork only result in like XX to XXXX readers can be heartbreaking.
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Tips thread for all authors (that want popularity) so they stop asking

Skip to 2nd part if not interested of the beginning After 5-10 threads that always ask about "how do i get more readers", and me sometimes re-using same words about the "why/how", i create this thread so some authors can go to this thread-link to if they don't understand. But first let me...

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In short why i say to rewrite your summary, is because it's too oldschool hotblood, like a old series straight from 2010.
As a f-coomer (with same age as Houshou Marine) that seen the evolution of WNs (jp, ch, en), a summary "X a hero gonna save the world ! WITNESS HIS HISTORY IN THIS BOOK !" is quite has-been and unattractive in 2020ish, try to take inspiration from how current mainstream summary in jp and ch webnovels are done.

Like : "I reincarnated !!!! I can't believe i was isekai-ed ! Its a dream come true ! But wait... Why did i reincarnate into a slime. Also why am i pink !!!!? REDO ! I WANT A REDO !!!!!!!"

Summaries need to attract the reader(s). Now there THOUSANDS of novels available, hundreds of mangas, animes, games to play. Now authors need to write a "eyeball" style summary and title. That is why JP authors write so long titles in a funny way = "Did you expect you could run away by reincarnating Onii-san?"

Also it need to explain the "original" part that differentiate it from others.
Sure your story is a revenge story but why read it and not the dozens of revenge stories out there ?

Yours is probably the "electric blade" part but its not obvious at all. BTW "electric" kinda unfit and "thunder" fit better. Because a fantasy world rarely use the word "electricity" unless there is technology or magic-technology in it. Just like "nanometers" can't exist in a world without microscopes, or "meat" on a planet that only have rock-existences.

If rewritten, a good summary for your series should be more like :
[Michael Bell Vanguard was the future successor of his clan. What he didn't expect what the fact that family members would betray him, the future patriarch. blablabla What they didn't know is that Bell had the unique elemental magic of thunder and a meteorite sword that easily could easily conduct current in it. blablabla Now after 10 years of preparations in hiding and strengthening his powers and body, the start of his revenge begin. "They will pay for what they did. My parents, my cousin, the elders and their stupidity. The other sword clans for aggravating the flames of the infighting as a way to destroy a dangerous potential enemy. The Magic families and the supposed "neutral" Magic Tower gloating by enriching their pockets by selling dangerous pricy magic items that allowed my family to hurt me. The Holy Church that also benefitted by getting a better reputation of eradicating a "devil" and gaining better control on the population. And lastly, all this dumb civilians for believing all the false rumors about me despite the truth being so obvious i was framed. They will all die and the continent will become a sea of blood"]

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For your cover.
Its very good.
Self-made, thumbs up.

Its just that the "background" with the spirals behind is not attractive.
AND readers can't see the pivotal point plot of "thunder blade" of the protagonist.
It just looks like a "common mana" blade technique.

 

[Gryphon]

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[avaseofpeonies]

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[J_Chemist]

Welcome to Genderbender Smut Hub where every story that isn't either or will most likely fail!

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[TheEldritchGod]

If I were to devour your mother before you were born, would you stop existing?

 

[ThrillingHuman]

If I were to devour your mother before you were born, would you stop existing?

No, I am an invariable part of all existence, a load-bearing wall of sorts. Even if the planet goes poof I'll still be there in the vacuum like a glitched out aaa computer game bug. Which isn't nice for the timelines where the Sun expanded around 60,000 years ago. But c'est la vie.

 

[TheEldritchGod]

No, I am an invariable part of all existence, a load-bearing wall of sorts. Even if the planet goes poof I'll still be there in the vacuum like a glitched out aaa computer game bug. Which isn't nice for the timelines where the Sun expanded around 60,000 years ago. But c'est la vie.

Whew! That could have been embarrassing. Glad I asked.

 

[Deleted member 68927]

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