Hi,guy I just wanted to ask the readers for request to try my novel I tell me what you guys thinks

[SMILEME]

THE WORLD AFTER DEATH

After dying to a meteorite impact in his past life,Kelvin Grey finds himself reborn in a strange world, a chaotic world, a world filled with magic, death,and a western mix era…how will he survive in such a world?

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[Ilikewaterkusa]

THE WORLD AFTER DEATH

After dying to a meteorite impact in his past life,Kelvin Grey finds himself reborn in a strange world, a chaotic world, a world filled with magic, death,and a western mix era…how will he survive in such a world?

www.scribblehub.com

Your grammar is all over the place. Use grammarly. It should help.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Use a tts program to read your work aloud, too. Our eyes often mistake the words we see for the words we thought we wrote.

 

[Le_ther]

Your grammar is all over the place. Use grammarly. It should help.

Also buy grammarly premium(totally not a advertisement bot)

 

[SMILEME]

Use a tts program to read your work aloud, too. Our eyes often mistake the words we see for the words we thought we wrote.

Airight thanks

 

[P00H]

Try ProWritingAid instead. It's 10 dollars/euros cheaper per month, and their recommendations are waaaaay better and more in-depth.

 

[SMILEME]

Is it

Your grammar is all over the place. Use grammarly. It should help.

Is it all the chapters

 

[TASTYLEADPAINT]

Try ProWritingAid instead. It's 10 dollars/euros cheaper per month, and their recommendations are waaaaay better and more in-depth.

Idk I feel like pro writing aid makes it more robotic sounding. Or maybe it's me trying to justify paying 100+ grammarly yearly

 

[Deleted member 54065]

Idk I feel like pro writing aid makes it more robotic sounding. Or maybe it's me trying to justify paying 100+ grammarly yearly

I'm using free ProWritingAid, and free Grammarly. I'd say, I'm getting more in ProWriting than in Grammarly. The only thing that you have to pay is the 'style' corrections, which you can change filter anyway.

 

[P00H]

Idk I feel like pro writing aid makes it more robotic sounding. Or maybe it's me trying to justify paying 100+ grammarly yearly

It might definitely sterilize out your writing style to where it doesn't have a personality, but you can pick and choose which "mistakes" you correct and which ones you leave there. I've used both and atm prefer PWA. They did change up their Real-time Expert lately, which I'm not the biggest fan of, but the corrections they offer are leagues above Grammarly.

 

[Deleted member 54065]

It might definitely sterilize out your writing style to where it doesn't have a personality, but you can pick and choose which "mistakes" you correct and which ones you leave there. I've used both and atm prefer PWA. They did change up their Real-time Expert lately, which I'm not the biggest fan of, but the corrections they offer are leagues above Grammarly.

PWA still shows your mistakes and sentences that need improvement, though the option to correct it (the style) is premium.

Well, the feature that identifies your mistake and/or needs improvement is enough. So I'd say PWA > Grammarly.

 

[SMILEME]

Thanks guys

 

[Thekherham]

Use a tts program to read your work aloud, too. Our eyes often mistake the words we see for the words we thought we wrote.

I use a program called Balabolka which also gives you a pronunciation guide. I deal mostly with aliens so I want the voice to pronounce the names like they're supposed to be pronounced, not like the AI thinks they should be pronounced.