Hello! I'm looking for feedback on my summary.

[ChickenIsTheBest]

Story here: My Wife Gifted Me An SSS-Rank Farming Talent | Scribble Hub
Summary:
In a world where monsters roam, dungeons stand, and heroes fight, Lloyd is just...a farmer. A mediocre, poor one at that.
As an orphan scraping by on a tiny plot of land in the countryside, Lloyd’s only goal is to keep his little sister fed through the brutal winter. But a strange woman keeps showing up in his dreams every night and eventually, he meets her in real life as well.
Soon after, he unexpectedly awoken a talent.
His crops, once ordinary, turned into divine treasures!
S-Rank Carrot – +10 Precision
S-Rank Potato – +5 Strength
With fields that grow miracles and a wife who is anything but ordinary, Lloyd’s life skyrockets from struggling farmer to unstoppable legend.

Personally, I feel like it's too brief and too cliche maybe? It's like something's missing but idk what to add. It sounds a little cringe but idk what to fix. I feel like there's more to add but what should i add?? I literally just posted my story like a day ago and already want to change things up lol.
Any help would be appreciated!

 

[YukieSama]

I haven't read alot of the farmer oriented litrpg's but it does seem cliche, which isn't exactly wrong and caters to the people looking for more of that subgenre. I honestly don't know what to change, because it literally tickles all the boxes for your audience. Maybe specify more about the wife's demeanor. "Anything but ordinary," is too vague for the female lead. Is she evil? A goddess?

Also maybe add what differentiates your novel from other similar farming one even just a small thing

 

[Fallow_]

I think you’ve got a strong core idea here, and that’s honestly the hardest part to get right. The stat-based farming angle has real appeal, and I can easily see it working well.
Also, your title is good, I’d say it already does a fair bit of work in attracting attention.

That said, the summary isn’t quite doing your concept justice yet. The phrasing feels a bit familiar, lines like “In a world where monsters roam…” and “just… a farmer” tend to blur together with a lot of other stories, even if what you’re actually doing is more interesting.

Your strongest hook 'the crops turning into stat-giving treasures' comes in a bit late and doesn’t hit as hard as it could. That’s the part that makes your story stand out, so I’d bring it forward and give it more weight.

The stakes are there with the sister and survival, but they don’t feel as immediate as they could, and the last line about the wife feels a bit early without enough buildup.

Also, small side note, did the name Lloyd come from somewhere? It kind of reminds me of a certain manhwa protagonist, so I was curious if that was intentional or just coincidence.

Overall though, this feels like a presentation issue, not a concept one. You’re working with something solid here, just needs a sharper delivery.