Hello everyone! I’m a newer writer, and I’d really appreciate it if you could give my book a read. Any support would mean a lot.

[hanimegirl]

My book has more chapters, it’s because I was nervous about getting feedback before, which made me stop for a while. But now, I don’t mind it anymore.
My book

 

[Eldoria]

Short suggestions:

1. Write a more concise synopsis by presenting a captivating story premise;
2. Give numbering to each chapter (for example, vol 1 chapter 1: prologue - chapter title),
3. Beautify the cover with a light novel/anime style (if possible, contain an elegant heroine);
4. Use genres sufficiently (3 - 5 genres) - it is best to focus on genres that are emphasized as the core of the story;
5. Maximize tags that are relevant to the content.

Good luck!

Note:
I'm not criticizing or offering suggestions regarding content. You need to improve your packaging before discussing content. Attract new readers first, then fix and/ or maintain the quality of your content.