First Chapter!

WinConditionStudio

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Hey guys! I'm a fledgling writer and have posted my first chapter of Abyssal Aces. Something I've been working on to worldbuild for a game I am also making. I would love some feedback and input.
Link is just below here.
Abyssal Aces
Thanks!
 

Max02

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Looks interesting.

I'll give it a try.

How many chapters?
 

Eldoria

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One chapter is too early to ask for a review. That chapter only represents the prologue. You should add at least 10 more chapters to achieve a sufficient overview of your story, including characters, plot, world-building, and moral.
 
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