First Chapter!

[WinConditionStudio]

Hey guys! I'm a fledgling writer and have posted my first chapter of Abyssal Aces. Something I've been working on to worldbuild for a game I am also making. I would love some feedback and input.
Link is just below here.
Abyssal Aces
Thanks!

 

[Max02]

Looks interesting.

I'll give it a try.

How many chapters?

 

[WinConditionStudio]

Looks interesting.

I'll give it a try.

How many chapters?

It's only one chapter so far. I would like to pursue a full novel or possibly novella. It's just going to take some time though.

 

[Eldoria]

One chapter is too early to ask for a review. That chapter only represents the prologue. You should add at least 10 more chapters to achieve a sufficient overview of your story, including characters, plot, world-building, and moral.