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[itsurboywill]

Hey just wondering if you guys can give me some feedback on my series I would appreciate it the name is called the bench warmer and billboard girl

 

[IWILLDEFYTHEHEAVENS]

Posting the link here will help

 

[itsurboywill]

The Bench warmer and the Billboard Girl

Minato is a talented yet deeply insecure left back who struggles with confidence.Exhausted form a late night travel team practice session he sleeps through the arrival of the school newest sensation: Emi a famous idol with shimmering light blue hair who is confident and also has her own flaws...

www.scribblehub.com

 

[FRWriter]

The first chapter has hundreds (not a lie, checked it with Grammarly) spelling errors.
Your grammar is also very shaky.

Every single sentence has multiple issues.

I applaud you for not using AI, but at the same time, you desperately need something like Grammarly to edit your chapter. As is, I can't recommend it to anyone; it's absolutely riddled with mistakes and not fun to read.

So until this issue is addressed, I can't even begin to comment on the actual plot.

 

[itsurboywill]

Yo I appreciate I will look into it