Feedback on cover?

[DismaiNaim]

opnions/suggestions?

A Place To Bloom | Scribble Hub

 

[great_sloth]

Maybe add some chapter numbers?

 

[DismaiNaim]

Maybe add some chapter numbers?

To the cover?

 

[tiaf]

another font

To the cover?

you might get better feedback if you upload your cover here instead of letting us stare on the tiny SH version

 

[DismaiNaim]

another font


you might get better feedback if you upload your cover here instead of letting us stare on the tiny SH version

 

[great_sloth]

Ah, didn't saw that its about cover. I meant to say that you should add numbers, i.e Chapter 1.

Sorry, anyways...

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A Place To Bloom - From your title the first thing that comes to mind is greenery. A verdant grassfield where flowers seemed to bloom every spring. Yet, from you're cover it tells that they (the people there) are still in search for that place.

I got no violent reaction as the cover is meaningful, but maybe add some green?

 

[DismaiNaim]

Yet, from you're cover it tells that they (the people there) are still in search for that place.

That's... that's actually it. That's what I was going for.