Dear crazies!

Makimaam

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Everytime I roast someone it comes back with double negative karma, so I try to be honest and nice. Writer has potential and should not give up, but they need to work on descriptive craft and narrative flow.
leave the roasting to me.

Yes, sauce. Because I have trouble telling and will assume a certain amount of polish from AI, plus AI won't generally do the cringe scenes crudely told that I witnessed.
Where do I even start?
The entire thing.
 

Conqueror_Quack

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Pretty sure that isnt the type of emotional support sock corty was talking about :blob_wink:
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sleepandeatallday

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I suffer the call of the Void phenomenon. Who else

Don't forget to check out my Pirate dark fantasy ✌️
Void phenomenon?
 

BearlyAlive

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ADD, undiagnosed depression, an addiction to porn, the urge to eat too much, occasional suicidal thoughts I'm too lazy to act on, crippling laziness... Yeah, no crazy here. No, sir. The voices in my head tell me everyone else is insane, though. Some of them even have solid arguments 🤔
 

LeilaniOtter

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I'm sorry. I honestly couldn't get past the Prologue. Numerous instances of "why are you using this word", which then makes me wonder if this is a translation through AI, and if so, it's not a very good one, I'm afraid. Try not to use words you really shouldn't use. It just kills your story. 😊

And please use the "Story Feedback" for your request.
 
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