Dark Knight (Manikas) Character From My Web Novel Series

[MrPasserby]

Dark Knight (Manikas) from My Web Novel Series "The Shut In Demon King Finally Comes Out After 3000 Years"

 

[Lloyd]

It's a knight, but where is the dark part?

 

[MrPasserby]

It's a knight, but where is the dark part?

Sadly, It's not colored. I'm terrible at it lol

 

[BenJepheneT]

It's a knight, but where is the dark part?

that's beneath the armour, i think

 

[Lloyd]

Sadly, It's not colored. I'm terrible at it lol

I mean it doesn't look like a dark knight. No spikes, horns, or demonic looking stuff. If anything the wings make it look more like a white knight.
Maybe if the fin thing on the helmet was more angular or sharp looking it would help

 

[DarkeReises]

I mean it doesn't look like a dark knight. No spikes, horns, or demonic looking stuff. If anything the wings make it look more like a white knight.
Maybe if the fin thing on the helmet was more angular or sharp looking it would help

Or it could just be fallen. A once heroic knight who faced a dark fall, but doesn't give up the symbol of his past despite the tainted color.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

Very nice!

 

[MrPasserby]

I mean it doesn't look like a dark knight. No spikes, horns, or demonic looking stuff. If anything the wings make it look more like a white knight.
Maybe if the fin thing on the helmet was more angular or sharp looking it would help

I see. I shall reconsider it on my next drawing. I'm still new in drawing, so I still have more things to learn along the way.

Or, if I got enough budget, I'll pay someone to make it better for my readers to enjoy it along the way.

Thanks for the feedback, they are highly appreciated in my web novel series.