Complete the entire book

[Sloth-of-Bangkok]

Last month i made the Poll in general chat about creating a Space Fantasy and now that book have been chilling in my release Folders. Normally, I am going to release it on Chapter by Chapter basis, but due to the my current computer going completely Banana I decided to completely revamped my release model.

As a fellow author, where should I get the feedback for my first draft and find the release site

Here is the first chapter

Chapter 1: Edgar Shin's Day Trip

From Sloth’s Catalog Welcome, dear visitor, to the Sloth's Catalog. How curious that the rhythm of consequence has brought you here. Now, let Sloth guide you deeper into this workshop. Within, stories penned by the Evil God—EG to his few friends—are curated for eternity. Around us, countless rack...

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[Sloth-of-Bangkok]

Noted I am canning this first draft completely upon realizing convoluted this Chapter have become, and basically working on the new draft: Same plotline, but I decide to explore other option. Here is the new construction of Scence1.

Scence1: Sloth's view point

600 Stars' Cradle: Opening Scene Analysis and Discussion Final Version of Chapter 1, Scene 1: Sloth introduces himself and the story of 600 Stars Cradle. Welcome, dear visitor, to the Sloth's Catalog. How curious, that the rhythm of consequence has brought you here. Now let Sloth guide you deepe...

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[Sloth-of-Bangkok]

And update. As per usual tradition. I decide to redo the draft again. Halfway there at the moment

Here is CH 1

Chapter 1: Edgar Shin's Day Trip

From Sloth’s Catalog Welcome, dear visitor, to the Sloth's Catalog. How curious that the rhythm of consequence has brought you here. Now, let Sloth guide you deeper into this workshop. Within, stories penned by the Evil God—EG to his few friends—are curated for eternity. Around us, countless rack...

docs.google.com