Best Novel

[MedicalKing]

I am writting a novel in whcih i will explore the Science of Cultivation because we are told that he has learned this or thta technique or the character is in close door cltivation but what does it mean.if we can understand it may be we can cultivate faster and better.what are your thoughts on it?

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915637/the-transcendent-genius-the-science-of-cultivation/

 

[Envylope]

Take a breather before posting new threads. And link your story, bro.

 

[Alski]

There is a book here on scribblehub called "The Science of Cultivation"

 

[Eldoria]

For me, cultivation is a plot device or worldbuilding, not a narrative goal (read: the protagonist's motivation). So, personally, I'm less attracted to fiction that places cultivation as a goal. If you make cultivation purely worldbuilding, that might be better.

 

[MedicalKing]

Take a breather before posting new threads. And link your story, bro.

hi thank you for the input, i dont know how to create clickable picture like yours so i have just put the link raw

There is a book here on scribblehub called "The Science of Cultivation"

Thank you for the input,i have changed the name.

 

[Corty]

The best? It's far from it.

It's also icky, especially after describing the autopsy, which is weirdly detailed when it's about breasts and the uterus, and giving a boner to the MC for it.

I got serious necrophilic vibes from the first chapter, so I would have dropped it as a reader.

Plus, you can't even name your chapters right.

The narration is also stiff as hell not to mention, repetitive.

Lastly:

You posted three chapters in October and two in January, and you expect readers? That's not how it works.

Reevaluate what it means to be the best buddy because this ain't it.

 

[AliceMoonvale]

The best 'most likely to be evaluated by a specialist', not sure about the novel part.
After that first chapter, I'm scared for you and wish you luck~