An ero novel...

[Friendly_neighbour]

It's the first Ero novel that I wrote that's why I need some reviews...
Name: Offering pleasure.
Synopsis: Just sex will do.
Review question: Did you have an erection?
That's it. Thank you for your help

Offering Pleasure

Addison had a special power since he was a kid. It's the power to make people horny! But he never used it until he was 18 years old... But when he started using it he never stopped... Stranger... Milfs... Teachers... Neighbour... Mother and daughter... He did sex with different types of...

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[RepresentingWrath]

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[Snusmumriken]

your Addison becomes Edison halfway through the 1st chapter. There are also a few past tenses that wormed their way into the present-tense story.

Is there a plot? because SH technically have this (

• Pornographic stories - These are content that are basically porn without a plot. This is referring to the whole story, not a chapter or 50% of your story.

in their Content Guidelines and from the look of it the only plot i got from 1st chapter is that he has a magic touch and he is angry at his peers

 

[Friendly_neighbour]

your Addison becomes Edison halfway through the 1st chapter. There are also a few past tenses that wormed their way into the present-tense story.

Is there a plot? because SH technically have this (

• Pornographic stories - These are content that is porn without a plot. This is referring to the whole story, not a chapter or 50% of your story.

in their Content Guidelines and from the look of it the only plot I got from 1st chapter is that he has a magic touch and he is angry at his peers

First I was writing Edison but Grammarly kept suggesting Addison so it was a pain in the ass to ignore it every time. That's why I changed the name altogether. Now that you have mentioned it I will change. Thank you