MFontana
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Since the release of Chapter 4 part 1, Aestelle Nocte had a sizable jump in readership, and favorites, which I must admit came as a surprise since Part 1 is probably the most boring part of the story so far (in my opinion).
It's slow-burn, and no matter what I tried to do, there was only so many ways of trying to make pizza for lunch into an interesting story beat.
For those who are interested, you can find the story HERE as well as linked in my signature (for those not viewing this thread on mobile devices).
I'm admittedly curious what parts of the story so far you've all found to be the best, or most interesting.
As well as who (so far) your favorite characters have been.
I've mentioned it before, but this story is primarily an experimental approach to reader-interaction and engagement for me. You, the readers, are the ones who get to primarily direct the action here, and there will be plenty of uncensored fan-service throughout. So, with us nearing the end of what amounts to Episode 1 of the story, I'm reaching out yet again to see where you stand on the characters, and the story.
What plot threads do you want to explore more of?
What plot points interest you the most?
What characters are your favorites, and why?
Who do you want to see more of in Episode 2?
Whose excited to see the new alien character's debut in Episode 2? (It's Princess Seiara of the Kitan Imperium).
And as a bit of a teaser, I used one of the free ai image-generators to get a couple of visual references for Princess Seiara of the Kitan Imperium as free bonus content for everyone.
It's slow-burn, and no matter what I tried to do, there was only so many ways of trying to make pizza for lunch into an interesting story beat.
For those who are interested, you can find the story HERE as well as linked in my signature (for those not viewing this thread on mobile devices).
I'm admittedly curious what parts of the story so far you've all found to be the best, or most interesting.
As well as who (so far) your favorite characters have been.
I've mentioned it before, but this story is primarily an experimental approach to reader-interaction and engagement for me. You, the readers, are the ones who get to primarily direct the action here, and there will be plenty of uncensored fan-service throughout. So, with us nearing the end of what amounts to Episode 1 of the story, I'm reaching out yet again to see where you stand on the characters, and the story.
What plot threads do you want to explore more of?
What plot points interest you the most?
What characters are your favorites, and why?
Who do you want to see more of in Episode 2?
Whose excited to see the new alien character's debut in Episode 2? (It's Princess Seiara of the Kitan Imperium).
And as a bit of a teaser, I used one of the free ai image-generators to get a couple of visual references for Princess Seiara of the Kitan Imperium as free bonus content for everyone.