My story is almost 2 months old and I want feedback, especially some critique so that I can improve
What to expect:
Slowburn Storytelling: A focus on character depth and steady progression.
Mysterious Worldbuilding: Explore ruins that feel alive, and ancient relics that hold dangerous secrets.
Tactical Action: Brutal and Tactical combat that focuses on environmental awareness, physicality, and exhaustion.
Atmospheric Writing: Expect to feel the world's cold weathers and Tenaro's hunger.
if you want to check it out, here is my work: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2239830/wildborn/
What to expect:
Slowburn Storytelling: A focus on character depth and steady progression.
Mysterious Worldbuilding: Explore ruins that feel alive, and ancient relics that hold dangerous secrets.
Tactical Action: Brutal and Tactical combat that focuses on environmental awareness, physicality, and exhaustion.
Atmospheric Writing: Expect to feel the world's cold weathers and Tenaro's hunger.
if you want to check it out, here is my work: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2239830/wildborn/
