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Please read mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

It was urban fantasy but it's not inside a city yet. Would you like to try? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Hmm, as if AI could write.

A very loooooooong chapter. I get why you want to put it that way. You don't want to leave it as a cliffhanger. Anyways, your scenes aren't too shabby, you are trying to write a dominant enemy and I understood your scenes. But apparently, I guess this is what "show, don't tell" means here...

46 chapters, so which chapter is the action scene? I only came here for the action scene, not skimming through every short chapters.

First off, if the mc is a fighter, he should've noticed the staff right at the beginning. Everyone knows what is a staff, so you don't need to explain it's use. I'm not sure what does average weapon means though. A staff is a staff, if you compare it to a dagger or sword it's longer. If you...

Somehow mine starts with a dark fantasy. Perhaps a little bit of horror and mystery. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like to have a try. Was wondering whether my 1st chapter is catchy or not. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like to try. I made a different approach by removing the old prologue. Not sure whether it's enough to catch your attention. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I would like a review. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Hello. I don't mind if your feedback is harsh or tearing me to shreds. Aside from the cover, I would like the synopsis and at least the first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world-volume-/

Ignoring the note. No idea because I haven't have a so-called final boss yet. At most, you can called it the final boss of every arc. What I keep in mind was the goal I wanted to achieve for that battle. For example: 1. Domr, a giant Fenrir wolf that was once an ally was brainwashed to...

Details, logic checks and filling in the plot holes. The hardest part for me is to do a logic check in mind to cover the plot holes. And boy oh boy mystery novel sure had lots of plot holes.

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So from what I understood, you have classes and mana. Too many things I want to ask, but I'm going to look at magic system only. Without classes, your magic is slower and cap lower. With class, depending on what the class are, you have different buffs with magic. Logic check: 1. Your mana...

Curious to ask, more is how many?

Pressing Alt + 9834 = ♪ in Microsoft Words. No idea if anything else could make such a symbol. It does not work if I type this code here in scribblehub.

Broken yet alive. A jack of all trades yet master of none. Bullshitting my bosses to get a raise and bonus. If I had enough money I would buy the company and make them my slaves.

No idea. But I only know how it feels with every closing arc.