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  1. YukieSama

    One word story

    Without
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    If you were to make a commentary of your novel, where would you put it?

    The glossary would be perfect for it. You might have to specifiy in one of your chapters with A/N that it is there though as most people don't check out glossaries afaik.
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    Writing Should I stick with single POV?

    I can't say whether or not it's better. In my own novel I use 3rd person for main mc and switch to first person for other cast member so the MC's voice never gets mixed up. My only advice is maybe add "Sofia POV" at the end of the chapter title so that readers know it's temporary. It's how I do...
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    Is it complex (power system)?

    I don't think it's complex. It seems like a simple escalation of power that can be directly translated to other generic systems like F-rank to S-rank, which isn't a bad thing. Does your story need a complex power system?
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    The photos in my Story disappear after a while - what am I doing wrong?

    You’d be surprised at how dumb people are sometimes from teenagers to the mentally unwell. Also if they didn’t check then couldn’t it be used for illegal material. Full circle probably.
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    Should I continue my story, or start a new one?

    Prob side story imo. I think smut readers would be disoriented to suddenly having sex scenes with a different man as the lead. Unless of course you've made that clear but your tags doesn't have multiple POV or multiple protagonist. So it might risk alienating your current readers.
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    Editing Non-english writters. How do you know that you are written right for english language standars?

    Short term, LLM would be your best bet i.e claude/chatgpt. It'll obviously lose nuances and things that make your writing you but if you want a readable experience for others then it's okay for that. Long term would be to learn English if you want to write in English. Read books, study grammar...
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    How to know whether you are over-describing or under-describing?

    Yes it'll be okay. But don't let it stop you from learning more about the craft and more on how to advertise your webnovel. For example you need more tags i.e cute children, doting older brother, younger sisters. Weak protagonist if the brother will stay weak. Every little bit helps as long as...
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    Christian Western Superhero

    I am curious what is a christian superpower? From a quick google I got this: Spiritual gifts, virtues, and divine enablement stemming from a relationship with God and the Holy Spirit, rather than comic-book abilities.
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    How to know whether you are over-describing or under-describing?

    Your chapter 8 is a better reading experience than chapter 1. I think I remember reading your first chapter 1 unedited and this edited one is also a better reading experience. Whether it‘s over or under describing depends on the scene’s goal. If the scene is about sneaking past a bear, then...
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    How to write without heavy repitition of certain pronouns and overstacking descriptions?

    Mix in the names of the characters and sometimes make the object the subject. He ate an apple. The apple was eaten. But yeah edit the chapter after is honestly the better way until it becomes instinctive. It's far easier to write down a scene choppily and expand than to do it perfectly in one try.
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    Are litrpgs modern pulp fiction?

    I wouldn't say litrpg's specifically more like webnovels in general. Another comparison would be pulp fiction publishers usually paid their writers by words and webnovels usually get paid by chapters i.e patreon or even webnovel where it's literal.
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    Family Drama (advice)

    I haven't had a direct family member but rather a cousin, I won't go into detail but she's the reason I don't really interact with that side of my family anymore. Forgiving her isn't something I'd do but she does seem to have a mental illness. Even then no. My unprofessional advice would be to...
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    Got my first real compliment

    I'm sorry but I find that hilarious. It reminds me of the seinfeld episode where George gets tied up and robbed by a woman only to find 8$ in his pocket and the woman takes his clothes.
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    Just depressed.

    I have a contract with them and they don't have the rights of the author. Only that one story. The criteria for the 1500 words is for the win-win or mgs. You don't lose the contract if you don't post. I haven't posted in 2 years on one story and didn't lose the contract and was eligible for new...
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    R-18 chapter are moths to a flame.

    I literally read it and still clicked on it.
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    R-18 chapter are moths to a flame.

    I have noticed a trend that my R-18 chapters get double to five times the views as my normal chapters. The thing is one of them is chapter 23, 500 views. But the previous chapter had 100. So it got my brain wondering, do people just read R-18 chapters without caring about the story or is one...
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    Repost

    Not sure if this is againsts rules but you could just delete it and create a new chapter and wait an hour or two (To be safe) before posting it again. But it won't show up if you keep doing it every 20 minutes or so
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    Writing Why would you study creative writing if a good narrative doesn't guarantee popularity?

    I want to look back and see that I improved even if I don't have a hit piece. The one thing I don't want is to look back and see that I remained the exact same and wasted years. Also writing is complex and studying frameworks gives me the sense that at least I'm doing something right.
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    First novel, I need some help

    It takes a while to build a large readership, some people get lucky, but usually it takes time and consistency. You posted your first three chapters yesterday, so it's too early to tell. Release schedules varies wildly from twice a day to once a week and your success also depends on that. Daily...
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