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    !st Chapter Feedback

    TBH, the kind of stories that would be read out loud on YouTube wow, just wow........ Trapped as some scientists' personal executioner, slowly clawing one's way to freedom, all while having 1 foot in the grave already? What energy drink were you drinking when you wrote this? And where the hell...
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    What's the weirdest fanfiction crossover you've ever seen?

    One Time, i once wrote a Tokyo Mew Mew x FNAF crossover, i dunno if I still have it, but when I showed it to my friends, they asked me if I took my medicine this morning? I also read a Winx Club x Mortal Kombat fanfic, but it was deleted by the author...wait that's not a bad idea! Like this...
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    !st Chapter Feedback

    Although slice of life stories were never my cup of tea, the 1st chapter did have some flavor to it, my one concern is that your cover art is a tad on the gloomy side, i understand its a dystopia setting, but a splash of color can go a long way, i myself made a similar mistake. 8/10
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    !st Chapter Feedback

    The poem was very well written and the synopsis was going in the right direction, but if I have to nit pick, i wasn't really feeling the first chapter, but i'm a guy who who's latest story involves a girl with video game based superpowers, so what do I know? 7/10 Mostly because I like the cover art
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    If you could have any Mech from any game/anime, which would it be?

    If you could have any Mech from any game/anime, which would it be?
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    !st Chapter Feedback

    This will be my first Feedback post, I will read the 1st chapter of your stories Here are the rules: 1. First come first served 2. I will be looking at the synopsis as well so make it pop! 3. don't be nervous, this is my first time as well!
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    What kind of Story should I do next?

    Well, Adventures of Arcade Girl has reached it's final Arc now comes the hard part, deciding what story should I do next? here are three choices: A Beast Tamer Story: I hear those are really popular on YouTube lately An Apocolypse Story: those are also getting a lot of traction A slice of Life...
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    I’ll Critique Your First Chapter’s Hook (Honest Feedback)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2281578/bonnies-full-moon-blues/ I Accept your challenge, give this a try!
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    Prequel or Sequel?

    Well, Adventures of Arcade Girl is about to reach it's final Arc, it's been a blast writing the tales my favorite sailor mouthed superhero, but a new question now remains, should I go ahead with a sequel, or should expand upon the lore with a prequel, or should I just go ahead with a different...
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    Who are the biggest jerks in your stories?

    Who are the biggest jerks in your stories?
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    You let your family/friends/co-workers/that guy down the street read your story or you don't because they might not understand

    Neither do I, with the stuff I write about, they'll just think i'm nuts.
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    I wouldn't mind reading your stuff and give you feedback.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2303630/adventures-of-arcade-girl/ Read mine....if you dare...
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    Adventures Of Arcade Girl- Reviews Needed!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2303630/adventures-of-arcade-girl/ Hey everyone, before I get to work on Book 4, would anyone be interested in reviewing what I've got so far? It would really help with the story going forward!
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    Ichigo if she was (gulp) CREEPYPASTA-D!!! 😳😳😳

    Make her teeth more yellow and her gums more infected, then we can talk.....
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    Sword or Spear, which would you prefer?

    Sword or Spear, which would you prefer?
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    Sub-Zero Appacolypse Powers: which would you choose?

    It's the Appoclypse! Temperatures have plummeted to -60 degrees, Frozen Zombies roam the city streets, you and others like you are given the ability to survive this hell, but you can only choose one of four powers: 1. Thermal Body: your body radiates a firey aura, allowing you to survive the...
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    Apparently I Have Bad Taste

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2237091/blood-of-the-wereraptor-hero/ To be honest, i didn't think that this story would get very far, but i was proven wrong i try to write smut, but my damn brain can't put it into words
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    Reincarnation: Animals!

    For me, the rhinocerous beetle is for me, tough shell, strength, a perfect fit!
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    Reincarnation: Animals!

    If you could be reborn as any animal, what would it be? Dinosaurs are allowed Endangered species are allowed Fantasy creatures are allowed, But only if they resemble animals (EX: Unicorns, Tanuki, Kitsune)
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