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We know Katara likely used blood bending while she was married to Aang.

My book Game Master in another world might suit what you are looking for, definitely no harem nor is the main focus romance. There are a couple of sex scenes (Optional 2 versions of same chapter), but it certainly isn't the main focus. It does have a little gender bending, not in the usual...

My rule of thumb, if the person is glazing you, they are likely trying to scam you. I've had several saying my story is absolutely amazing. I know for a fact this is not true. I did an email exchange with one and found out they were from Pakistan, yet claiming to be from USA. They are likely...

From dashboard click on stats, and then insights.

What I found curious were the other countries, like Russia etc. I would have guessed a book written in English would have had not as many non English readers.

I'm curious as to what others country breakdowns look like. You can find mine attached.

I deleted my first chapter, and moved small elements into the second. On reflection the info dump was unnecessary and not grabbing people.

I'm planning to have a chapter span 20 years with not too much happening, what I'm debating though is how to handle it. The book is a first person perspective of an invisible observer. This will be largely watching a child grow up from year 0 and become an adult in a medieval style village set...

Your D&D group wakes up as their characters and your DM is now the campaign’s villain. How do you all survive modern life (and each other) with magic and mundane bureaucracy standing in the way?

Well, I failed to achieve my goal, she just didn't care enough about the character, I've released the 2 chapters anyhow, it was going to be too big being one chapter.

I would love some constructive criticism. I have my wife review, but she isn't interested in the story, it could be because it is boring, or, just not her kind of story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1920164/game-master-in-another-world/

Hi don't suppose you could take a look at my book so far: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1920164/game-master-in-another-world/ I'm still trying to find my writing style a little.

Indeed, I'm looking at the stories that have made her cry in the past, as inspiration.

Thanks to your feedback I reckon I've solved the issue, I've deleted chapter 1, and just put a flashback to what was in chapter 1, chapter 1 was completely unnecessary.

I've never heard about that comic book, interesting

To be honest I was using an actual game we had as the story but changed the names up to provide anonymity, but, was drawing a blank as to what to call them lol.

Thanks for that, I'll have a go at reworking that chapter or even removing it all together.

Thanks for that, the game isn't relevant to the actual theme, it was more set as an intro to the main character. I'm wondering if that first chapter should be removed even. I like your idea of reworking it to be the middle of a fight scene, I'll see what I can do.

I've had 4 so far, one even asked to switch to email, so I created a throwaway email account and continued the conversation. They claimed to be from the US, but are actually for Pakistan, so extremely high odds of a scam. What frustrates me the most about these comments, it makes me second...

I currently have 4 chapters published, and have had feedback from my wife and a reader, which has been great. But I would be keen for some others too, my current concern is the pacing, I'm not getting as far as I had planned in my outline, but is this ok? Also my Wife's complaint is that it...