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    Feedback on my new chapter.

    I just want to know if this chapter was engaging or not, that's all. Without any delay, they glided over the slumbering horde. The air around them was thin and filled with sulfur. Deron was not going to run out of breath; inside his chest, his lungs kept expanding and collapsing relentlessly...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    ehh...i decided to scrap the prologue and write something that connects to the main story directly as a prologue. But i will take your suggestions here.
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    Sketch dumps.

    Well, it was meant for a necromancer in my novel.
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    Sketch dumps.

    Thank you! But I am only talented at pencil art. :blob_sweat: Oracle has complimented me. :blob_aww: Thank you, man! I love your raw sketches, too.😍
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    Raw Sketch until getting better

    It is beautiful. :blob_aww:
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    Sketch dumps.

    Thanks man. 😁
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    Sketch dumps.

    Inspired by few people in here, I decided to dump my sketches here.
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    My art for today

    I love the 2nd pic.
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    Writing How to handle sensitive content regarding the mother's childbirth scene?

    It would depend on the scene right? If the scene supposed to be tense then 3rd option is good, of it is a memory 1st option is good, idk about the 2nd one.
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    A GxG Novel 😈

    What is HL?
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    I wouldn't call it climbing? More like they were scaling a huge wall with their wings, and took short breaks in between using nails and ropes. And thank for reading, I'll try to improve the things that you mentioned.
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    Writing Which approach to moving the plot do you prefer: world influences MC or MC influences world?

    Somewhere in between? I prefer dynamic worlds where the MC's actions affect a few things.
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    Finally completed 10 chapters.

    Thank you guys @Eldoria @TheKillingAlice @EchoHellion :)
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    Oh, sorry, ch 10, I kind of got confused.
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    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    ch 11. I'll give you some context. So the new MC is from a memory of a bandit in the past, and he and his band of bandits are scaling a wall( they have wings) rn. But the character traits of the old MC are disturbing him.
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    Finally completed 10 chapters.

    Thank you :)
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    Finally completed 10 chapters.

    Finally completed writing my first 10 chapters, I know it is not much, but as a new author, it feels good. :blob_aww:
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    Writing How tolerant are you of whether the scene elements should be showing or telling?

    If people want to know their tolerance levels regarding this, they can read my initial chapters and find out. :sweat_smile:
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    Finally done.

    Originally, I wanted to paint a stone road beneath him. But it's just a pain to do.:blob_sweat:
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    Finally done.

    Thank you😍
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