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me too.... but then it's title said eldritch slime!
me too.... but then it's title said eldritch slime!- sleepandeatallday
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Giving feedback based on the first 3 chapters of your story(closed)
Oki I'm glad I decided to give feedbacks cause I would've normally never chosen to read a magical girl trope. I never realized it'd be so fun and interesting! That said, I read the first 3 chapters and if I had to rate it out of 10... I'd give it a 8.5. The characters, especially female lead...- sleepandeatallday
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nope. Here! Take one! *gibs you a cookie*
nope. Here! Take one! *gibs you a cookie*- sleepandeatallday
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Just call me up when you do! I'd like to get front row tickets for the drama! :blob_cookie:
Just call me up when you do! I'd like to get front row tickets for the drama! :blob_cookie:- sleepandeatallday
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Giving feedback based on the first 3 chapters of your story(closed)
Sooo.... I've been bored recently and wouldn't mind reading a few chapters to go on a journey to find new engaging novels. Though be aware, I'm not really great at giving feedback and sometimes I might get frank.... like calling your mc bland as a papercup level frank. (sorry) I'd just give a...- sleepandeatallday
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The chapter I wrote for my fic...
The chapter I wrote for my fic...- sleepandeatallday
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Offering feedback on your first chapter
hi, so if you like horror would you be willing to provide feedback on my work? Street No. 44- sleepandeatallday
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want some thoughts to my dystopian hindu mythology novel
Dystopian!? And based on hindu mythology!!? I'm in! I did read 3 chapters... but it felt a bit bland... especially the mc. I'm sorry. I don't think it's my cup of tea. That said, the beginning was good. The tragedy did reel me in to read more but afterwards the story was bland. The time skip...- sleepandeatallday
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nope! This name is my brand now! >.<
nope! This name is my brand now! >.<- sleepandeatallday
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nope. Just this afternoon after I got unexpectedly motivated after 3 weeks!
nope. Just this afternoon after I got unexpectedly motivated after 3 weeks!- sleepandeatallday
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I finally did it! I wrote another chapter!
I finally did it! I wrote another chapter!- sleepandeatallday
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