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I just slice up random vegetables like cucumbers or carrots or paprikas and have them with me while I work on things, and by the time I'm done working, the vegetables are gone... Also, I use them quite a bit when cooking, especially onions! And garlic.

...Am I misreading this, or is this basically "So you just want it on the main page?" followed up with "No, I just want it on the main page"? Because if that's the case, then excuse me for laughing, but that's hilarious. I see the point you're making, and I respect the fact that you prefer...

I'm going to write this here because I wouldn't want this to be the first thing written on anyone's story: -Synopsis is choppy. First sentence and second sentence oppose each other without clarification. -Capitalization is inconsistent in the chapter titles, as well as chapter 1 content. -There...

While hilarious, I think writing an entire story's dialogue in all caps would just make it difficult to read. The author's also losing out on a lot of potential writing tools, like differentiating common words versus story-exclusive terms! There's a difference between magic and Magic, earth and...

Most recently, music! Playlist songs that just happened to play one after the other. They kept distracting me with other ideas, so I threw out what I usually write to write something else for the day. BigBang - Last Dance BigBang - Loser Flow (AmaLee Cover) - Sign

First, answering the actual thread... Others have given most advice I could think of, but something I don't think I saw was analyzing the works that are already popular and learning why they are popular in the first place. Don't plagiarize (obviously!), but try to take what you can from them if...

Well, by definition, Isekai is literally otherworld so no amount of time travelling can ever fulfill the criteria. It's just...the virtue of that word, I (Other) + sekai (world). That being said... I need to make a stand for my first anime ever. Inuyasha is not Isekai; it's a combination of...

Everyone has their own way of coping with burnout, which does seem to be the case here. Me, I cope by doing exactly this: I'll never drop writing because I love writing my thoughts; it's just sometimes, I don't want to proofread, or think about what's enjoyable, or think about what makes sense...

Best friends, of course!

I'm going to be snarky and say... I don't like English and I don't like America. One is kinda overused...? and the other one, I can't really understand why should a country be split into 50 different states, its just feels weird. I really don't actually mean that, please don't kill me. What I...

And you're totally right, everyone's bound to have biases about controversial topics like bullying. I sometimes mistake my own opinions as facts until someone points it out too. Regarding the journal or broom bit though...these things do happen, and those teenagers definitely aren't murderers...

I personally don't think there's anything wrong with a long or detailed synopsis. What makes yours difficult in specific is the language is too advanced, and too many jargons are being used. Focusing on your main character could work, and a lot of fictions do choose this path, but also try...

I sort of agree with the first part about people not really understanding the complexity of bullying if name-calling and beating is all an author can think of. I definitely disagree with bullying being described as nuanced, subtle, and going on inside/outside of school. Bullying scenarios will...

I prefer it when there's a sadness element in fantasy conflicts. Not necessarily deaths, but more like characters fighting against their wishes, struggling for something they can't reach, or fighting with a ton of regret for not having done something to prevent the fighting altogether...

I read the synopsis and maybe the first half of the first chapter! I tried to at least skim the rest. I can tell you put a lot of effort into making this story, it looks like you have a lot of content you wanted to share. I think the biggest problem with your story is that it's a lot of work to...