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I love bothhhh! I grew up with Percy Jackson as my favorite novel when I was a kid, so I do prefer writing in first person, But for reading? It doesn't matter. It just depends which fits your novel better. For your novel hm... I think it wouldn't matter too much. Choose whichever you're...

You don't have to completely follow my review, lol. They're just things I noticed as a reader. You can choose which ones you agree with and think are right, and which ones you would rather fix your own way, or not change at all. If you want, you can also go the opposite route and fully flesh...

It's ok. Hm... this may sound cruel, but Chapter 1 feels unnecessary. The exposition is still there. I like Chapter Two better. You might want to add more details here. For example, when you say Collin sat down by his friends at the table, help the reader imagine how exactly they are...

Read the other ones, lmao. Turns out I somehow chose the safest boring option. Now I'm disappointed I didn't turn OP.

I got 'Master of your Craft!' Yayyyy!

Dude's head is way too big in both of em. He reminds me of the Queen of Hearts.

I hate in random conversations or action scenes. But I really like it when the author dumps large blocks on exposition in crafting, planning, or resting scenes. Of course, you have to make me care first. But if you MC is likeable, and after some plot stuff, you have em all rest and you tell me...

If it's generated, I think the work itself is against site rules. In that case we should go to Tony.

Your work was edited by AI, please note that down in the synopsis.

Eh, I think it may be that your prose is just not suited to webnovels? You definitely have a more traditional novel vibe. And the fact that your paragraphs are so chunky do not make it better. Most of the problems I see are smaller ones like unnecessarily explaining. You do not need to tell us...

...Seriously as in, do I want to write and sell novels for a living? No. Seriously as in, do I want to improve to become the best writer I can be? Because I love writing? And since making it my livelihood is risky, I'm studying for a different major and job? Then yes.

Tell me, oh believer, why did you call me(?)

Will try after lunch. I have heard that my reviews can be a tad fierce, so please take it as a hint of salt.

I have zero to swap. But I'm up to review.

I just realized my novels suck cuz my prose sounds too Rick Riordan-y. But I write dark romance.

It's okay. Just drizzle white chocolate on their faces then. It'll taste good. Edit: Ok, this sounds questionable. I meant more like... swab it onto their noses and lick it off? Damnit, that sounds weird too. Hm...

This promo is somehow amazing. 5 stars.