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Alright I see you've already received like a dozen of answer, but what is one more right? To be plain simple: my story is fun. At least, that's what I'm trying to do with it. A fun journey, fun characters, fun fights. Fun fun fun. If things like a "procrastination" and death hug" skill appeal...

I think those things always happen in cycles, just give it some time

I mean, it's a good setup, but you'll be living on the shadow of some of the biggest stories in the genre. It's hard to compete with DCC

I think in order to be safe, you should change it

I think that's fairly common. No one knows exactly what makes a story appear on the trending list, otherwise people would just game the system

Honestly I'm just writing my first villain and I'm trying to reflect someone on a same journey from the MC, but affected by different circumstances that choice by choice drove her close to madness.

I think 5-10 works well

I've eaten my fair share of vegan meat, and when prepared well they taste delicious

Would anyone be willing to give a go to my first few chapters and tell me what you think I'm doing well, and what I still need to improve on? I've received some feedback already and have been thinking about editing a few things, but would like to hear some more opinions. Thank you all! The...

Well done!

Nothing like the feeling of finding a thread with the answer to a question you were about to ask

Thank you for the explanation! Two messages to go :)