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    Story help needed

    Sounds like you're writing Beware of Chicken without actually having ever read it. And yeah, playing with different POVs and otherworlders is great... If you do it well. BTW, most people say POV changes are annoying, but I personally enjoy them. You could use Inexorable Chaos as an example Why...
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    Looking for some feedback on my story (I'm NOT promoting it! I swear...!)

    Okay so, jokes aside. I've been asking for some feedback in all those 'free feedback threads' but... Let's, uh, let's be honest. The guys take forever. As in, "It's been two weeks and I haven't heard sh*t about them" forever. So, any kind soul that feels in the mood to do some fair criticizing...
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    ㅤ

    I do, I try to criticize as harsh as I can someone else's story and then I look for every single critic that can also be applied to my own story. I also look for comedy stories and try to compare the funny bits between them and my own story.
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    Just another beginner artist's scribble waste

    Like faces 2 and 4. Four-kun looks like a punk. I can literally hear him go "Huh? Da fuk ya think ye are, fucka?!"
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    Story help needed

    Why not write them both? You can even have them both happen in the same universe.
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    This is a delicious cake, you must eat it

    You know you remind me a bit to obese Thor from Avengers: Endgame
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    Motivation

    Roleplay your characters and imagine how they would react at the point you left them. I know it's weird but it's a last resource I'm always recurring to. Music also helps. And a girlfriend. And chocolate. But mostly a girlfriend. Because of, you know...
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    This is a delicious cake, you must eat it

    Aaah, but you see, the forcefield also repels force
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    Help open my eyes!

    SOMEBODY HAND ME THE CHAINSAW, WE HAVE WORK TO DO PD: (No, Franky, leave the painkillers there and go get me a mop... actually, make it a lot of mops, we'll need them)
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    This is a delicious cake, you must eat it

    You guys are no fun Alright, here's another one: THIS IS A DELICIOUS CAKE, YOU MUST EAT IT
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    What's The Reason For Your System?

    Exactly. Though mine deviates a bit from that at a later stage.
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    This is a delicious cake, you must eat it

    Answers?
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    Is time binary or a spectrum for you?

    Time is a lie. The only thing that exists is an ever-changing present.
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    Pizza

    Hawaiian pizza. Cheese and ham pizza. Neapolitan pizza. Shrimp pizza. Shroom pizza. I like them all. I still like cookies more tho.
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    What's The Reason For Your System?

    Oh, that's a cool and original pseudo-system
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    What's The Reason For Your System?

    A set of functions and variables that handle all the information in the world, usually allowing its inhabitants to have some level of access to information
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    What's The Reason For Your System?

    Well, that's actually pretty similar to my own story. Basically, Joe (the God of MC's word, and some others in the vicinity) felt bored, so he implemented the System as a way to create entertainment.
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    What's The Reason For Your System?

    So, quite a lot of web and light novels use a so-called 'system'. I won't start discussing this or that details, since they can go from overly excessive to completely ommited. My question to you, writers, is... Why exactly is there a system in your story? Now, don't misunderstand me. I'm talking...
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    What songs are you listening to?

    Right now, Five Finger Death Punch's entire discography
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    Abilities/powers/skills/talents/

    As for A... I guess that's true. B is not quite true, you just need power in acording to the distance between both points
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