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Has anyone recommended The Breath Of Fire series yet? You ought to give them a shot.

When I make a minor grammatical error in the title:

Or are you a secret masochist?

I knew it was coming, so I'm not upset about that. But the way it happened is crazy disrespectful, lmao.

Sad to say, but yes.

I'm curious about that, too. Maybe that slash was all he had left in the tank?

As of right now, I'd give Daisuke a 2/2.5. He's capable, but in terms of what kind of power will be displayed later, he's got a ways to go before reaching 10.

Not really quotes, but I love these two (Akane isn't related to him, by the way): "Ugh! Daisuke-nii!" "What is it?" "I need help! I'm stuck!", Akane exclaims. Surely, this broad is trolling. Then there's: I'm starting to wonder if I'm attracted to yanderes, or if they're attracted to me.

Sorry for the late reply, but thank you for the feedback. I really do appreciate your critiques and criticisms. I admit that I didn't really think too much about the first chapter, and just wanted to put something out there to get things going, so it ended up being rather sloppy as a result...

One must find balance between the abyssal darkness and the blinding light to find solace within oneself.

My suggestion would get me put on a list, so I don't know.

Eh, I've got time. And I'm always looking for some constructive critique. My Enigmatic Life - Volume One, Chapter One: Late Night Talk | Scribble Hub

Daisuke is lacking in self-confidence, is too hard on himself, not very personable and is rather willing to self-sacrifice.

My computer crashed immeadiately after I posted this. So I guess I know how it feels about this question.

Yes or No?

Your description of the scenery is quite good. Although maybe you be more verbose and save yourself from writing so much, while still being as vivid as possible.

I jot down my story ideas in a book.

I listen to a lot of Jazz/Smooth Jazz/Acid Jazz, so I really couldn't narrow it down to a list. Stolen Moments by The Oliver Nelson Septet is one of my favourites though.

Alright, Mr.Paul, I've got it right here. I'm curious about how your rate the grammar above all else. P.S. It's a wee bit degenerate (like me), so be forewarned. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/672537/my-enigmatic-life/