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Well this is considered spoilers but the best example of that is Shadow Slave thought you'll have to read close to 2k chapters to even understand it. Sadly I'm only on volume 2 in my story and world shattering events of the heaven falling from the sky (literally) happens at the end of 7 (or at...

Yeah, it'd be a miracle if she survived for more than 3 days and I am stretching it. People often forget just how brutal we humans once were...

If you wanna do it professionally, the standard is 5-7 chapters a week at 1,5 and 2k words. If not, then whatever you want, it really doesn't matter.

Damn you beat me to it, I was just about to say the same thing. Since, my first answer was taken, I'd say Arthur vs Cadel from Tbate in Victoriad

Alright, off I go. There's a lot of work to be done here. First and foremost, emotional depth or rather, lack of. There is not a single indication of emotion. Not from the narrator and neither from his father. Especially at the beginning where the entire interaction feels mechanical. It could...

I just did.

Damn they are thirsty. So thirsty in fact, they are out for your blood. (Dw the window is right next to me I know what I have to do for the terrible joke.)

Two out of the four you listed, I've used myself... I believe (hopefully) you are not implying I'm an Ai but just because something is uncommon doesn't mean its Ai (referring to 'barely above a whisper' and 'otherwordly glow' although the otherwordly not pared with glow) For the moment, you...

In a linier magnitude, like I am writing lets say a fight which lasts for like 2-3 chapters, sure, a hundred different ideas come into mind for me to choose to use. But every single one of them will lead to what I originally planned. It's good to have big imagination but if you're facing a blank...

...You don't get it (and its borderline scary how many people don't, but alas). The point isn't to give me a superficial answers. This and this and this.... No. These aren't the answers I am looking for. They are yours. The point is to pinpoint exactly what the problem is and deal with it. I...

What was it that made you change trajectory from the original plot in the first place? Why did it happen? Where does it lead? You can't continue writing if you yourself don't know the story you are writing.

https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/please-put-your-story-link-in-thread-description-or-in-your-profile-signature-when-requesting-feedback.5348/#post-466924 How are people supposed to find your story if you don't post it? Sincerely read this post, and update your own.

I write it on 4theword because I like to time myself with it and helps me start writing (its much easier to write 5 pages on the daily if you go with the mind of 'okay lets write a single page' and then all of a sudden I have only written for 10-20 minutes so at that point I go like okay 1 more...

Of course they are!

I don't mess with anything genderbending related stuff at any level. The moment I even get the glimpse of it in a conversation I turn away. I don't even know the differences between a man and a woman, much less write them, much less spin them on their head to create... this. The only reason I...

I was just about to mention him. Curseyou Bayle!!!!!

Isn't that the feedback thread?

Thank god I am not underaged cause that pedo file is looking at me kinda sus.

Honestly I'd lie if I said I wasn't interested but at the same time I feel like you tried to blend a bit too much together. 'If everything is a plot twist then there is no plot twist' kind of thing.

Is there a dub for this? Or does it fail to capture the sheer comedic value of the sub?