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  1. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    [Submissions Closed] Unreliable Feedback v2

    Oh, sorry. Here it is: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1146797/starchaser-beyond/
  2. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    [Submissions Closed] Unreliable Feedback v2

    Is this still on? Idk about the 5k+ word count requirement, but the entire work in total does go over that amount. Work's in the signature. (Interlude 1, can be skipped because it's very reference heavy, and it starts ramping up with the faux "LitRPG" after the Interlude.)
  3. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    I need the most pretentious name ever.

    Garbernaferthal-Sprite-Slayer Greatest-of-all-Imp-Mephits
  4. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    What exactly makes a LitRPG?

    Thanks for all the info! Guess the last one I was working wasn't a real LitRPG since it was just some info cards. Thanks for the idea! I'll do just that, collapsible boxes it is!
  5. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    What exactly makes a LitRPG?

    Wait so, what if there is no "system" or "admin voice" or disembodied goddess voices, and the Info Cards are strictly for the readers only... would that count?
  6. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    What exactly makes a LitRPG?

    Does it need an info card whenever the MC and his party obtain new skills or equipment?
  7. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    What makes your lead unique?

    During her final battle before being Isekai'd, she walked out of the flames and smoke wearing a cartoonish purple dinosaur costume, which killed her badass entrance and lost fifty dollars worth of balloons. Didn't help when she took it off because underneath she had wrinkly jeans and a...
  8. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Feedback thread (yes, another one)

    As a fellow food pfp, here's my first series, link is on the signature. Hams for everyone!
  9. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Fairy Feedback v2

    Thank you very much! I'm currently working on the advice of those who've given me feedback to add / rewrite some of the chapters, especially with the grammar and overall worldbuildling, since some have told me certain things do need fleshing out. You're quite accurate with me hurrying towards...
  10. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Fairy Feedback v2

    Hi! Newbie here, hope it's not too grating. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1146797-starchaser-beyond/chapter/1146798/ You can read up to chapter 4, Ch.5's just an interlude for the next "season"
  11. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Gimme Stuff to Read :3

    "Newly Awakened Outer God Works as a Truck Driver?" Well, I guess we all now know why it works that way...
  12. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    First 3 Chapter Feedback

    Hi! Story's on the sig. Hope it's not too grating.
  13. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    En-chan's Feedback Part 2 [5/5]

    Hi! Newbie here, story's on the signature. Hope it's not too grating... Also, Hams for everyone in the thread!
  14. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Oh! Well, still that's an extra ham for you.
  15. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Chanting spells

    Chanting nowadays (especially in Isekai) is used as a plot device to show how bad everyone else is in magic... Bring back the cool ones like "Sheathe these feet in the Driving Gale / Make swift these legs / Over land I sail!" and "By Nature's Hand / By Craft, by Art / What once was One / Now fly...
  16. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Writing Prompt You are transmigrated into the novel you just gave a bad review

    Sigh, guess I gotta help my Uncle Jack, off his horse... I hope that was just a grammatical error, there was too many to count...
  17. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Hello, newbie here, would appreciate some feedback for this series I'm writing, hope it's not too grating. The link is on the signature pic.
  18. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Free feedback thread.

    Hi! newbie here, just posted my series. Got a few chapters out already. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1146797/starchaser-beyond/ Just to set expectations: it's Isekai and the MC is a (former) Magical Girl, the type that prefers to go Kengan Ashura on monsters instead of twirling a...
  19. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    I just realized about writing a fighting scene

    Just an idea... because I'm not that confident in my own writing either, if your character is supposed to be someone very good or very strong, you can have another character be the POV if you want to capture the feel of the fight being overwhelming. Rather than name abilities you can just...
  20. Elmir_Arch-Ham_of_Omega

    Weed farmer in another world

    This will be the greatest Isekai ever!
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