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  1. Jaymi

    Writing How to Write Funny Scenes – Lessons from My Chapter “The people's architect”

    How to write comedy (my way): write something you think is funny. Read it again --> is it still funny? Good job, then it's probably funny.
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    lol, i liked that. Anyway, just a heads up: I might be a bit biased because your story has a most of the things I like in it. (it kinda reminded me of Overlord) But yeah, I liked it. I really did. The writing style is easy to get immersed in, and at no point did I feel bored or want to skim...
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    Writing Prompt The First Game to Make

    I would but I do not know the game “SCP:CB” ? Looked it up on google and it seems like a horror game; maybe have the protagonist make a horror game, but make it “meta” for the world he was transported in. Like, imagine they have cyborg-elfs in that world, you could have the main monster of the...
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    Thank you so much, i’m really happy with the result!

    Thank you so much, i’m really happy with the result!
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    Anyone ever launch the idea of coordination amongst authors here?

    I was in an invite only RR discord group, they survived a month before they grew to damn near hate each other and ended up screwing each other over ? that’s when I knew i was done with RR and writing groups
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    Writing Prompt The First Game to Make

    I’d remake the entire history of gaming, starting with Pac-Man then Mario then Zelda then Minecraft and finally Fortnite. i will make them all have micro-transactions and become rich and live an easy life. ?
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    Battle of Megacity-0 complete! Feedback wanted

    Dunno if it helps but i use Notion. It’s free and in my opinion one of the best writing apps for any creative, i use it for literally everything
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    Writing How do you choose/find titles for your chapter?

    “Oh i forgot to add a chapter title.” *random title that has little to nothing to do with the chapter comes to mind* “Ehh, good enough.”
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    What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author?

    The best feedback i’ve ever received was probably to trust my readers imagination. The worst was “add smut” ?
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    One Word Review

    review the political and economical state of the world right now. (or my book)
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    Since Chapter 1 was super short, I wanted to read Chapter 2 as well. I’ll be honest, the formatting kinda killed my patience :blob_dizzy: Having to scroll sideways for basically every single line makes it really annoying to read on PC. It’s not about the writing itself, it’s just physically...
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    I love it so muuuuuuuchhhhhhhh

    I love it so muuuuuuuchhhhhhhh
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    Feedback requested

    Hi, maybe link the story so we can actually read it >.>
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    You're lucky I'm a sucker for magical girls ;c …okay, I take it back. You don’t have to be lucky, because even if I didn’t like magical girl stories, this chapter was really good. I mean, you know it's good when the only thing you struggled with while reading was pronouncing the names, lol...
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    I'm planning to keep doing this for at least this weekend, so I'm sure I'll get to yours as well =)
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    First off, it was a bit hard for me to get hooked at the beginning. There isn’t really anything pushing the plot forward at first. The first moment that actually caught my attention was him checking the bloody calendar and realizing it’s his birthday. The dialogue is fun, but I think it could...
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    First things first: welcome to scribblehub! Love the reason behind you wanting to write this story! I hope I end up inspiring my younger brother to pick up writing as well some day :v Now, for the chapter. i wanna say i’m surprised, but that sounds a bit backhanded so i’ll just say this: it was...
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    Looking for cover artist (Got one now)

    i noticed, i already went ahead and messaged you on discord :)
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    Looking for cover artist (Got one now)

    I want to give them a chance as well. It's up to them whether or not they take that chance, so far none have. Ill dm ya if you dont mind ;') ...oops
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    I dunno if this is possible, but...

    I think what they meant might be more of a 'co-author' feature
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