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Excuse you? Nah, I'll just pretend I didn't see that. :blob_cookie:

Not gonna lie, that's kinda slow. :blob_cookie: What are you, a geriatric possessed by a dead sloth? JK, but I don't think that living off that money was the plan. You don't actually have to go that far. Self publishing would suffice - and even if you don't have a name to yourself, you will...

So, you are on a site with an endless amount of stories for free and try to sell stories? Now, that's just silly. You think people will commission you, if they could just look up their favorite ship on Ao3? That's just silly. Seriously, just write a novel an self publish it, if you want to earn...

Psssst, your FanFiction Banner "Schwarz" in your Signature isn't linked to the corresponding Fiction. It's linked to your Si Vis Pacem Fiction. :blob_cookie: :blob_hmm_two:

Hetero. I feel like I'm the only person in the world who uses that, but it's gotta have a name as well. They are. But at least put in some effort, that should suffice (somewhat).

I'm like that one lazy bum on this Forum who only ever looks at the synopsis and the cover if they don't like the genre. In this case, I dislike GL as much as I dislike HL, if not more, I'm passionate about BL, so I'll just look at it with a cursory glance. Thefore, take my words with a grain of...

I mean, just replying pulled it back up, so it really didn't matter that much what I had to say. But yeah, I mean, if we get that first intro into the world and see how it is, it should be the other way around. Like, have him make that statement first, then turn it around - how he noticed that...

This poor dude is probably asleep and has to wake up to this. :blob_cookie:

Well, the community is there to help (if someone feels obligated). :blob_cookie:

You should thank @Eldoria for that, though. :blob_cookie:

Why is it broken up like this? I get the idea that you want to create pauses, but that's too much. oô Example: His obsession doesn't need a reason, but it does have a name - hers. <- Use that as the hook, if you want one. Sera Romano ran from her family’s empire and built a life she thought no...

So, since nobody else answered, you get no reply from the Gods of Writing, but the Asshole of the SH Forum: I literally only read the synopsis, because it's not my genre and, going by how little engagement the story garnered, maybe we should start with the obvious parts that should normally draw...

When it comes to the length of a synopsis: Think of the back of a printed novel and imagine your text on it. If it's too long to fit, you know it shouldn't be this long. Take it as a rule of thumb, until you gather enough experience. The author's note - and with that I mean that obsolete extra...

I currently have the same issue. This thread definitely existed before I went on my hiatus. :blob_hmm::blob_hmm_two:

Since nobody else answered: I'm not the person you would want to give you feedback in any of the book's contents, because I don't like hetero romance. But I do dark gay romance, so from that standpoint, I don't get why there is so much... going on? Like, I get it, people are being sissy about...

Yeah, that sounds like someone had a massive stroke. :blob_cookie:

The really old work? Bold of you to assume I actually look at that. :blob_cookie: Hell nah, do you want me to go back to my crippling depression phase? :blob_popcorn_two:

For once in my life, I will try to be a bit concise: "Show, don't Tell" is an important thing to note, especially to beginners. They tend to "Tell" every little aspect of the story, but especially those things that pertain to the personalities of their characters and how they develop. Unlike...

Even so, the fact that distinct "childishness", the incapability of comprehension on a certain level, even agrees with your textbook definition of the term "stupid". So don't get your panties in a twist - for once, it's really not that deep. :blob_cookie: