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  1. Cookiez_N_Potionz

    First Webnovel

    Hey guys! I was wondering can I get feedback on Chapter 5 and what do you think of the new bookcover? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    Narration and twists?

    Which is more popular? A straightforward story or a story with lots of twists Does genre also matter?
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    Hello! Can I get some feedback?

    Right now, I'm writing more chapters but Im not posting them until May. Just wanna know your thoughts on the chapters I have up and how my MC functions as a person. Also, I wanna thank the 20 readers for checking out my story. Your awesome...
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    Help, need advice

    My current synopsis ain't hitting and I'm trying to improve it. How do you write a Slice of Life-LitRPG story without the Isekai and not make it boring? People are saying the exposition in my first chapter isn't needed. So if I delete chapter one is that better? My MC's gets his system in a...
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    Are my chapters getting better or worse?

    Hello, I'm Thorn! So, I still have a lot to learn when it comes to Webnovels and when I decided to write this LitRPG I didn't really have a hook. No end of the world or high stakes and I ruffled a few feathers for not having those aspects. But I didn't wanna make my MC suffer in this story...
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    I'm curious to know your opinions

    Okay! Hey, I'm Thorn. I mostly write supernatural, mystery, sci-fi, alt history, paranormal, Lgbtq, fantasy/urban fantasy, action, and mythology. So, I have a few completed stories but I don't wanna post them on here for reasons like stealing. But if your interested in giving me feedback on...
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    Wrong Thread

    My bad
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    The Succubus and The Maverick [LitRPG]

    Hey, I'm Dawn Moon and I'm in my late 20's. I like to writing about paranormal, mystery, action, adventure, alt history, fantasy, sci-fi, and Lgbtqia topics. Currently, my story has 16 chapters out and I would love some feedback...
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    Am I using this Genre right?

    Mostly: LitRPG ( Other tags: Drama, Supernatural, Adventure, School Life, Mystery, Sports, Lgbt, and Martial Arts ) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    Prologues

    Hi Are prologues good or bad? I know people have a love-hate relationship with them, but I just wanna know some opinions. Do people skip prologues?
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    Trying something new with a story

    Hello, SH! It's been awhile since I've been on because I was working on different novel projects and crusading through life. Hope everyone is doing well? So, I only have 4 chapters up and it's in a genre I like a lot which is Supernatural/Mystery. But I'm also combining these with the LitRPG...
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    Just a little feedback would be nice, thank you

    Hello, SH! It's been awhile since I've been on because I was working on different novel projects and crusading through life. Hope everyone is doing well? So, I only have 4 chapters up and it's in a genre I like a lot which is Supernatural/Mystery. But I'm also combining these with the LitRPG...
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    I need some honest opinions

    To get the best advice and criticism should someone use SH or RR? I kinda wanna focus on one website Sincerely, Thorn. Thank you!
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    Nvm

    Nvm
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    Superhero stories, Yay or Nay?

    Are superhero and villain stories overdone or poorly executed these days? For example: I wrote a story about zombies and superheroes
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    A milestone in a genre I suck at

    I'm not much of a critic when it comes to giving out reviews for stories. Most of the time I just read what I like, I don't really like romance but I don't mind it as a sub-plot. With this mindset I feared it would stump my growth as a writer, so I wanted to challenge myself. Good news is I...
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    Novel Crossovers

    I've always been fond of crossovers in TV shows, but I noticed not a lot of people do crossovers in their writing. So far I only know one example: Rick Riordan. Anyway, since I've been a fan of crossovers I would like to do this with my stories one day. Um, what's your opinion on crossovers in...
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    Honest criticism \ •~• /

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    Gone

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    Your favorite genre?

    Hey everyone, I'm Thorn and my favorite genres are paranormal, mystery, sci-fi, alt history, action, urban fantasy, and adventure
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