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Does this count? This is from one of my scene when Lucifer fights Lilith: Luke and Lilith hovered in midair, both of them bruised, scorched, and bleeding in more places than they cared to count. They were also grinning like maniacs. “You’re getting slower,” Luke said, rolling his shoulders...

SageGPT. Stop provoking the Skynet GAAH! My writing! I got sucked into this forum black hole again! Alright, I’m escaping before it consumes another hour of my life. Bye!

Really? No one here has ever had a heated debate with an AI? Like when it keeps insisting its suggestion is correct, and I’m keep saying, “No, how come you don't understand,” and it replies that I’m the one who misunderstood it? Wow. I must’ve unlocked some kind of achievement

I kind of built my own little cult on RR, so yeah… it works better for me there. On SH I get around 1/8 of the views I get on RR. I’m pretty sure that’s because I managed to hit Rising Stars there. The funny thing is, though, after months of posting regularly, I’m actually starting to see some...

I also use it for self-encouragement. Sometimes I ask it to give editorial feedback on a chapter I just finished. If it tells me the chapter is bad, I go: “Who cares, you stupid AI.” But if it says the chapter is good, then suddenly it’s: “Ooooh, this AI is smart. It understands me perfectly.”...

I do. A lot. (There, I said it.) I use SageGPT for brainstorming. The guy’s smart, and I’ll stand by that. But I’m not using it to tell me what to write next. That’s not the point. What I actually need is the process, the back-and-forth conversation. I throw an idea out, it responds, I react...

I mean… this is basically a group of cute chibis being high, right? (Hurray for fantasy magic mushrooms.) For me, it reads more like a wholesome scene. Not really my personal cup of tea, but if your goal is to make readers go “heheheh” and smile, then you nailed it. If you’re aiming for the...

You make it sound like you can't be a good writer if you do comedy. If you can deliver a comedy that many people enjoy, then you're pretty much a good storyteller. There's a reason why people in entertainment industry always say that doing comedy is harder than drama. Unless if your standards...

"Our Alliance name should be Pentagram Economic Naval & Industrial Security" Monny roared, "THAT'S IT!!" "Did you even check what the acronym would be?!" Belphy roared back.

Thank you so much! I was busy fixing my early chapters again after reading this notes. Yes, now i try to put a bit more description to some parts, not all. Since i also need to calculate the comedic timing. On later chapters the style would slowly shift to show-not-tell thingy. I keep this...

D-Did my wife sent you?

OMG! Did god sent you? I mean, yes im using Java because why not, no one would understand anyway if im using latin. (viva google translate!) And yes, it would be very cool if i can use the OG Java. Especially since in my book 2 and 3 there would be more chanting language needed since there...

In my defense. Latin is overrated. GAAH! THIS CURSED BELL AGAIN!

....Okay, you and english are my frenemies from now on.

Best: When my readers fixing my grammars for me (in RR not here) Worst: When a reader complained about a scene where a immortal husband (forever lv. 1) being beaten up by his demon queen wife (max level). Telling me if i dont like reading about a wife being beaten by her husband, i shouldnt...

Oh hi there mr. mood booster. Yeah, i really should. I realize the same problem when i already wrote dozens chapters. Apparently speaking fluent english when you're drunk doesnt equal good grammar skills in writing :\

I tried to stop staring into the abyss. I succeeded for one moon. Fingers danced. Words formed. A book was born. Then I peeked again. Now it’s been two nights. No words crawl from my fingers. No books grow. Because I am once more staring into the abyss. And the bell stare me back

Gaah! Really?! Forgive me for being old Okay done.