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    If I were to rank your feedback, out of the around 10 I have received, yours is like the 3rd or...

    If I were to rank your feedback, out of the around 10 I have received, yours is like the 3rd or 4th harshest but only due to a few words, and that's if I really try to analyze it. I truly appreciate all feedback, good or bad. Otherwise, how can I improve my writing? Even if you tore into me and...
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    My little reading corner. Story feedback. Quality not assured. Opinions reign supreme.

    Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it! Also to answer what I have to offer you, I have gotten that reaction before. To be completely honest, Cain is weak in the beginning, he's not unique, but due to certain aspects he becomes unique, one of these influences is noted at...
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    And I appreciate your honesty and help in my endeavor to improve. I thank you truly ?‍♂️

    And I appreciate your honesty and help in my endeavor to improve. I thank you truly ?‍♂️
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    Thanks a bunch, hope you enjoyed :blob_aww:

    Thanks a bunch, hope you enjoyed :blob_aww:
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    Thank you so much. I appreciate the support :blob_salute:

    Thank you so much. I appreciate the support :blob_salute:
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    Thank you for visiting Empress ?‍♂️

    Thank you for visiting Empress ?‍♂️
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I appreciate the help in feedback, thanks a bunch! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Thank you for the explanation. To tell the truth, I'm just bad at the past, present, future things. I can fix the obvious ones but I have trouble realizing the more technical ones. When I check my work I just reread it in my head and see if it sounds good. Reading it out loud from now on might...
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Immaculate! Amazing feedback I must say. Thank you for detailing everything. I admit I have already been revising chapters, 1-25 multiple times as I improved and 26-85 recently. It seems I didn't find all my errors. I appreciate you looking over my story and the feedback. Thank you so much...
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    My little reading corner. Story feedback. Quality not assured. Opinions reign supreme.

    A new opinion is always welcomed: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/
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    How would you feel about someone pointing out typos/grammatical errors in every chapter?

    I LOVE getting feedback. Actually, if you would be so kind and have the time, I would gratefully accept some grammatical and error feedback. Of course, the prerequisite is you actually enjoy what you are reading.
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Oh great and mighty chick, I offer you my story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/
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    Free feedback thread.

    I have indeed done revisions recently
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    Free feedback thread.

    Yep. Thats the one.
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    Free feedback thread.

    Early August I'm pretty sure
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    [Closed] Free Feedback from the Prince

    If you see this, if you ever open back up this thread could you let me know? Love getting advice from different peeps. :blob_evil_two: Here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/
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    Free feedback thread.

    Just to ask, did you review my story before or after my revisions?
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    After Becoming Extremely Bored, ile and Eve made a Lazy Book Corner

    Love to have your gal's opinions! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/727045/lowly-ascent/
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Don't worry, I have nor will ever tell a reader my story gets better. I've only said that because you are a reviewer and a fellow author. I do plan on revising my story again and again as I get better, of course I can't revise everything because the story is already published but I just think of...
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    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Thank you for the review. Much appreciated If you would have more time, I hope you will continue to read. Although I know my story isn't the best in the beginning (everything you pointed out is spot on). The story, in my opinion, becomes much greater and more intricate later on. Again, thank...
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