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Okay, I'm on chapter 10 right now and figured I'd give some feedback. So far, things like grammar, and writing style are good. The problem is the story. We are jumping into this tale completely blind, nothing about the world, the people, history, NOTHING. All we got are some context clues, but...

Dark is better even for day reading. That white background is just too bright. You know what they say, once you go dark...