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No. No no no. This is terrible and disgusting. And don't even try to rationalize it as that 'everyone's blind but me' delusion. What you are trying to do is normalize a fucked up situation. There's nothing 'thought provoking' about this crap, and a relationship with that kind of age gap is...

That's why you: 1: change up how you use 'said.' IE: He ran over and said, "It's done." / "It's done," he said as he ran over. 2: don't overuse dialogue tags. As long as you follow those two basic steps then it being boring and annoying simply won't happen no matter if you use 'said' for every...

This is bad. 'Said' is invisible to readers. It's meant to tell you who's speaking. If you use other words, then it becomes visible. Therefore it becomes annoying and repetitive when you use words other than said. Don't try to be cool by replacing the word said. Just use said and your work...

Another way is to just not. Force the reader to imagine what skin a person has themselves. No one can ever be offended that you leave it up to them.

A woman was feeding her fish, but she had one koi that was rather shy. So she named him Coy.

They are both on the same level of difficulty to write. However, the real skill comes from being able to write both of them together in a way that flows well. A story that contains both well done comedy and drama will be a much more enjoyable experience for us than drama or comedy alone. If we...

We're sorry, but [ ] for dialogue in English is just straight up wrong on every level of the language. That and you're assuming that the 4 people that said something are the only ones that care about it.

We appreciate this! Thank you. We will also accept this challenge. We will gain more than 100 follows by chapter 30! Thank you for making a clear line to cross. Self imposed challenges are good and all, but having them be set by others is much more rewarding. At the same time, we won't be...

Thank you all for the wonderful suggestions! I'll be checking all of these out over time.

We match the song with what we are writing. We've had some of the most depressing music you can think of playing on loops for hours. Other times we've had screamo going. Other times it's whatever weird thing we can groove to. We do need music to write and edit though.

If you have the set up and voice for it, at the very least audio reviews could be good. Web cam included if you're feeling adventurous. You give out good feedback, so you should be able to do well with it.

Thank you very much! For that 'talking to' bit, we realized our mistake of not making it more clear. +++ are intrusive thoughts --- are flashbacks. We can make it more clear though. That bit where she's being talked to is a flashback. And it might make it more clear that the supernatural...

Thank you all so much for the help! We can't tell you how much good this has done for us.

Thank you for the feedback! Not wanting to be outdone, we've revised it quite a bit. May we get you to go through it again? And what details do you feel could be left out? "Kendall is a young teen who struggles to cope with her past of sexual abuse by beating down Robbie, her classmate, in any...

Again, thank you guys for the suggestions! Looking forward to reading them.

We have not. Thank you for this! We'll be adding it to our list.

Title says it all. We'd like to hear of any good story that gives a decent amount of focus on spiders of any kind. Have read Mother of Learning and So I'm A Spider, So What? Thank you in advance.

If we see an offer, then we'll take it. We could use more feedback on this. Title: Even in Chains Synopsis: "Kendall, a young teen who struggles to cope with the PTSD of her past sexual abuse, has been tormenting her classmate Robbie for years. Over time, she began to push how far she could go...

Make up names that sound right. We picked Kendall for our main character because it sounded right. Same for Robbie. We did have an Aella, which was just weird. lol Thankfully we saw sense before we debuted and changed it to Emma, though it still feels off to type out her name like that when for...

We like to come up with points along the way, and then make stuff up as we go along. It's been working out quite well so far.