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I'm all alone. There's no one here, besides meeee?

Hello, and I thank you for the feedback. I tried not to add too much to the synopsis. Didn't want to spoil anything major. But I'm open for suggestions.

I'd appreciate any feedback. Also is the synopsis too short? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/82404/ascension-of-the-storm-herald/

Uh. I can't really make out what you typed. But I currently have 6 chs out.

That's actually what I planned to do. But way down the line. My MC will reform a dying sect, which will form the base structure of his kingdom.

Time and space manipulation because you need both to function well. Don't want to go back in time and find you're not standing on Earth lol. But I'd simply rewind back to the Dinosaurs and Egypt, etc. Oh and especially the early humans. Wouldn't be able to understand any of their language and...

Did I win yet?

Horrible? It's a malignant growth, I desire to remove at all costs lol Honestly I've spent multiple hours on a paragraph or sentence as I'm writing the essay or ch etc. I've done that all my life. I've learned to live with it but, trust me it's very unpleasant. Idk why I do it either. Probably...

It varies a bunch, because my chapters are roughly 2500 and I have an issue to where I can not stop editing as I write. It's honestly pretty painful lol. I remember being in college and hating writing for the life of me, but when it comes to writing what I want, oh i love it. I tend to have...

I don't know about that specific example lol. Haven't seen Tron often, but I think I understand what you mean. In my rewrite, I've actually culled alot of the prologue. I think it was too dialogue heavy for a web novel immediately at the beginning. Thanks for the suggestion

Vacation. He was at a family reunion party. And he got sucked up in the Summoning of the Heroes

I thought your analysis was helpful. Do you mind doing the same to my own webnovel? I've been looking for feedback as well. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/66335/saga-of-the-endless-storm/

My webnovel is called Ascension of the Storm Herald I've replaced the two opening small arcs. So instead of getting summoned into the castle, he gets summoned into the dungeon he was supposed to stumble in. I'd appreciate any feedback. Thanks...